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The intimacy of dream

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 02-09-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

      The intimacy of dreams

Your essence passes through my head,
A candy stick, peppermint red.
Bringing my heart and glands to savoir,
Sweet and spicy filled with flavor.

A singular warming lovely drift.
Manifesting a special lift,
A unique feel of coterie.
Of loving lingering ardency.

With intrusions of illusions,
I just cannot reach conclusions.
A sense of real so hard to sew,
Like no other discern I know.

Your mind brooks my meditation,
No two of the same elation.
And though I linger intimacy,
Invention, is a fantasy.

In seems my cup runneth over.
Will dreams be my only nova?

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 02-09-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy
Intimacy of dreams is very nice
It has an extra special spice
But dreams will never ever feel
As good as intimacy of real
Very enticing poem, young man
Liz
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2 posted 02-09-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Sy, I never thought I'd enjoy a poem about your glands but I guess I was wrong!  
WhtDove
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3 posted 02-09-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What a way you have of putting that!    
"Sweet" dreams and all!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
SEA
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with you


4 posted 02-09-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sy~ using my immagination
    lost in concentration
    feeling no fustration
    only anticipation!

(my husband will thank you later~wink wink) -SEA
Sally S.
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5 posted 02-09-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

That's quite a dream,Sy!  Juat as in real dreams...a visual mixed bag.  Well done!
WolfsMate
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6 posted 02-10-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

Sweetly sensual. Enjoyed this much!

 "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 02-10-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

nononon dreams arent the only thing nonon i wait its only a poem got excited there yuh goood one yuh
Christopher
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8 posted 02-10-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Berry interesting Sey!
LOL, some different imagery!
devina
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9 posted 02-10-2000 03:22 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

The peppermint stick says it all Sy!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 02-10-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
What a naughty, naughty swirl,
From a naughty, naughty girl.
But I loved your comment. Love Sy

Balladeer, It's all glandular, didn't you know?

WhtDove, Glad you enjoyed. *L*

Sea, Very cute enjoyed your comment.

Sally, Thanks for the well done.

Wolf, Thank you, nice comment.

Chris, Nice coment, thank you.

Devina, Very cute, thank you.
Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 02-12-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Sy, I enjoyed this!  Great poem!

 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!
HelmutB
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12 posted 02-12-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

If this is an intimate dream
I do wonder what the once like your not telling  
I love the lines
"With intrusions of illusions,
I just cannot reach conclusions."
Truly a gem created by you
Thank you for a chance to dream



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

 
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