»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
The intimacy of dream
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
The intimacy of dream |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
The intimacy of dreams Your essence passes through my head, A candy stick, peppermint red. Bringing my heart and glands to savoir, Sweet and spicy filled with flavor. A singular warming lovely drift. Manifesting a special lift, A unique feel of coterie. Of loving lingering ardency. With intrusions of illusions, I just cannot reach conclusions. A sense of real so hard to sew, Like no other discern I know. Your mind brooks my meditation, No two of the same elation. And though I linger intimacy, Invention, is a fantasy. In seems my cup runneth over. Will dreams be my only nova? |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy Intimacy of dreams is very nice It has an extra special spice But dreams will never ever feel As good as intimacy of real Very enticing poem, young man Liz |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Sy, I never thought I'd enjoy a poem about your glands but I guess I was wrong!  |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a way you have of putting that! "Sweet" dreams and all! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sy~ using my immagination lost in concentration feeling no fustration only anticipation! (my husband will thank you later~wink wink)  -SEA |
||
|
Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
That's quite a dream,Sy! Juat as in real dreams...a visual mixed bag. Well done! |
||
|
WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Sweetly sensual. Enjoyed this much! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nononon dreams arent the only thing nonon i wait its only a poem got excited there yuh goood one yuh |
||
|
Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Berry interesting Sey! LOL, some different imagery! |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The peppermint stick says it all Sy!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, What a naughty, naughty swirl, From a naughty, naughty girl. But I loved your comment. Love Sy Balladeer, It's all glandular, didn't you know? WhtDove, Glad you enjoyed. *L* Sea, Very cute enjoyed your comment. Sally, Thanks for the well done. Wolf, Thank you, nice comment. Chris, Nice coment, thank you. Devina, Very cute, thank you. |
||
|
Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Sy, I enjoyed this! Great poem! I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
||
|
HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
If this is an intimate dream I do wonder what the once like your not telling I love the lines "With intrusions of illusions, I just cannot reach conclusions." Truly a gem created by you Thank you for a chance to dream The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
