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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
On this cool crisp morning there is a mist rising from the forest floor as the orb crests the mountains. It’s tendrils slink down through the tall white pines ,reaching out and caressing everything in its path. As the mist shrinks away, the forest floor comes alive and tiny flowers are awaken by the visitor. When it reaches me it cups my face, I close my eyes and surrender to its warmth. It is at this moment I know I have been kissed by the sun. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Marvelous! What a terrific picture of a beautiful gift  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tasi- This is lovely and full of image. I could just feel the sun. 'When it reaches me it cups my face' Beautiful. Welcome to Passion's. Very nice entrance you've presented. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautiful entrance into Passions... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Wonderful! Such beautiful images...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
Thankyou all for your encouragement.I am in awe of the literary talent presented on these pages . It is a visual feast!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tasi~WELCOME! This warms me up as the rain falls outside my window! -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! Beautiful imagery! I could feel it! Excellent arrival! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Just lovely!!! Please accept my welcome to Passion's as well. This was very good, indeed. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
My gosh Tasi ... where do we catch the bus to this magical forest Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
SEA..I am gladI was able to make the rain go away for a brief moment. WhtDove and Sally S Thankyou I really am enjoying Passions forum. Rex... the bus will have to take you to the Yukon!!! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A walk through green canope One of my favorites weehe Your poem such tender felling bring Made my feet wanting to walk and my heart to sing Well done and so kissed by the sun Welcome The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tasi what a devine poem, it was a fantastic read Tracie |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful! Welcome to passions! Hope to read more soon! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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