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The Kiss

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Tasi
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On this cool crisp morning there is a mist rising from the forest floor as the orb crests the mountains.
Itís tendrils slink down through the tall white pines ,reaching out and caressing everything in its path.
As the mist shrinks away, the forest floor comes alive and tiny flowers are awaken by the visitor.
When it reaches me it cups my face, I close my eyes and surrender to its warmth.
It is at this moment I know I have been kissed by the sun.  


© Copyright 2000 Tammy Catling - All Rights Reserved
Beki
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1 posted 02-09-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Marvelous! What a terrific picture of a beautiful gift  
Poet deVine
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Beautiful imagery!
Marge Tindal
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Tasi-
This is lovely and full of image.
I could just feel the sun.

'When it reaches me it cups my face'

Beautiful.  Welcome to Passion's.
Very nice entrance you've presented.
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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Beautiful entrance into Passions...
Breathe~
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Wonderful!  Such beautiful images... )

 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
Tasi
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6 posted 02-09-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi

Thankyou all for your encouragement.I am in awe of the literary talent presented on these pages . It is a visual feast!!
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with you


7 posted 02-09-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tasi~WELCOME! This warms me up as the rain falls outside my window! -SEA
WhtDove
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WELCOME!  Beautiful imagery! I could feel it! Excellent arrival!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Sally S.
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Just lovely!!!  Please accept my welcome to Passion's as well.  This was very good, indeed.  
Rex Allen McCoy
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My gosh Tasi ... where do we catch the bus
to this magical forest

Rex}<{{{{o>
Tasi
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SEA..I am gladI was able to make the rain go away for a brief moment.  

WhtDove and Sally S Thankyou I really am enjoying Passions forum.

Rex... the bus will have to take you to the Yukon!!!  
HelmutB
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A walk through green canope
One of my favorites weehe
Your poem such tender felling bring
Made my feet wanting to walk and my heart to sing
Well done
and so kissed by the sun
Welcome

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

tracie66
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Tasi what a devine poem, it was a fantastic read     Tracie
Echo Rhayne
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This is beautiful!  Welcome to passions!  Hope to read more soon!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
 
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