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My love for you

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jytree
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since 01-26-2000
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omaha ark usa


0 posted 01-26-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for jytree   Email jytree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jytree

My love for you is just right,
Maybe sometime I can show you all night,
You are beauty at it's Finest,
When I see you I think may I make to you my highness,
Because girl your so fine tonight,
I just want to kiss and hold you tight,
My love for you is a fun ride,
Now please don't run and hide,
I love you,
Now I am going to show it,
That night you were so hot,
and don't think your not,
When you turned night into day,
That is the way,
I am going to remember you,
Hom cute you are,
when you act cool,
I love you enough to never hurt you,
If I did the planet would go boo,
So if you want to test my might,
Come with me and stay all night,
Your hot to me,
I must say,
But for me stay that way,
I love you more than you could ever know,
But one day I know it will show,
How much you mean to me,
So find me and you'll be set free,

A love poem by Jay vaughn.


 
© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
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just about where I want to be


1 posted 01-26-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

better! much better! so much sweeter than the other one! but the other one was good too! nice work!

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"
Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere


2 posted 05-10-2000 05:33 AM       View Profile for Broken_Winged_Angel   Email Broken_Winged_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Broken_Winged_Angel's Home Page   View IP for Broken_Winged_Angel

  Definitely more happy.  Good, too..

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


3 posted 05-11-2000 02:17 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi jytree!
Its just like the one I have! Beautifully expressed. I loved it but remember patience is the key.
Sincerely
A_L
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