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Beki
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0 posted 2000-02-09 08:36 PM



Between the Lines

I don't need dirty books,
                    x-rated movies
                    or obscene words
                    whispered in my ear.
You don't need soft music,
                    candlelight,
                    romantic sighs
                    and mushy poetry.
So I'll compromise
                    and write erotic poetry
                    springing from the thoughts
                    that lie hidden in my mind.
I won't use 4-letter words
                    that describe the act of sex
But I'll give you enough
                    to make you stop and think.
I'll lead your imagination
                    between the lines
And leave the mystery
                    between my thighs.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-02-09 08:43 PM


Becki~ Good for you! This is excellent! I really like this!  -SEA


                    
              
                

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-02-10 01:35 PM


Thank you Sea  
jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
3 posted 2000-02-10 03:00 PM


Beki, this is great, brought a smile to my face tonight!!!!
Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
4 posted 2000-02-10 03:26 PM


That's the way to do it, gal!  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest


Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

5 posted 2000-02-10 04:03 PM


WOW!!!!
I WOULD TELL YOU WHAT THIS POEM DOES TO ME BUT.... I HAVE TO GO TAKE A SHOWER  

 Today is the first day of the rest of your life.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
6 posted 2000-02-10 07:56 PM


Thanks Jascanvey and Kess! Glad you enjoyed  

WIzzard, I am ROFL!!! If this one sent you to a cold shower, you really must be read my erotic work. I wrote this long ago before I was brave enough to write honestly! LOL. Thanks for the compliment!

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
7 posted 2000-02-12 04:20 AM


Bumpin up for one more round..forgive me please....
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