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Love without thought.

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fool
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0 posted 02-09-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fool

Uplift me you said
and I took you in my arms
and we did the dance of love.

Inspire me you said
and I sang my song of love to you
till tears streamed down your cheeks

Elate me you said
and with a flourish
I handed you a single white rose

Move me you cried
and I wrote a sonnet
of such boundless devotion
you had no words to express your joy

Change me you said
and I looked at you,
and would change nothing

Please me you smiled
and I took your hand in mine
and caressed each finger with my lips

Love me you whispered
and without a moments hesitation,
I did.

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1 posted 02-09-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Fool, Love. Such complete,beautiful love. This is wonderful!!   -SEA
Beki
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2 posted 02-09-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Yes, who could possibly ask for more? This  poem says and gives it all!
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 02-10-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Hey fool...sorry couldn't resist....this is beautiful!  

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
Kyttn
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4 posted 02-10-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Kyttn   Email Kyttn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kyttn's Home Page   View IP for Kyttn

Aww, how sweet.  Very well written.  
Wizzard
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5 posted 02-11-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Good Job Fool
Sweet with a bit of humor.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-13-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Hey fool love me without a moments hesitation.  Very fine.   You did a good job on this one.   James
 
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