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So young were we
when Destiny said hello
there was much to see
~little did we know~

In 1984, our lives would change
and bring us love~
but, "not just yet",it was decided
from somewhere up above

Lessons to be learned
love had to be taught
pain for our hearts
~these lessons~or so we thought

You had to go your way
I had to go my own
though our path's kept crossing
how could we then have known.........

Ten years later.......
with the ringing
of your telephone
~so clear to us~
our destiny was shown

We had Intervening Angels
working hard to help us see
our love~all along~
was always "meant to be"
-SEA-
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1 posted 02-09-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

What a great story .... told by a beautiful poem.....loved it SEA
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BSC, I thank you very much. I wrote this for my husband. It's our story~well not all, but the basics! -SEA
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This is lovely Sea,you
have told the story so beautifully.
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4 posted 02-09-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

How do they say Love can build a phoneline?
No i got that all wrong...can build a brigde, that's it.
Your poem has build a nice bridge, so fine done in word and style.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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5 posted 02-09-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Beautiful poem SEA.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

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Fool~ thanks!  

HelmutB~Thank you!

Mistikman~thank you kindly!  
-SEA
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SEA-
I am a lady that adores angels in any form ... now along comes your
'Intervening Angels'.
How precious this is.  
I'm overwhelmed with the love in this.
Nice job, friend.


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very nicely said, and lived  
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Oh Marge~ Thank you! I'm blushing from your sweet praise!

Beki~thanks
-SEA
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The tale dreams are made of!  

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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Nicely done, Sea. I'm a believer in what is meant to be, will find a way to be. Looks like it happened for you.  
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WhtDove~thank you~he is my dreams come true!

Balladeer~Jon and I were meant to be together. We both had to grow up first.
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I'm glad those angels intervened for you, SEA... for you deserve every happiness! *S*
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SEA - This is a really neat poem the way you brought in the concept that angels intervene WHEN it is time, even if we ourselves don't recognize that.  Thanks for the deeper message that trusting in destiny is as important as trusting in ourselves.  Nicely done, m'lady.
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o yuh i love destiny and told so well
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Whether it's destiny, fate, or intervening angels, it's nice to know that something is at work in this world that brings meaning, balance, and yes, even love into our lives.
Well written!  Oh yes, I wonder if there is a way to summon those Angels?
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Suthern~Thank you very much!  

LngJhnAg~Oh, you're so nice, thank you!  

Walt~thanks!  

Danny~ you don't have to summon them, they're right there with you!Just talk to them, they hear you! Glad you liked this!  
-SEA
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SEA: The magic of love - written about so beautifully..

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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SEA your so blessed to have a love so true   something others aspire too....and a nice read too !!
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this is great, love the story, love the poem  
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SEA - another beautiful poem, thanks for sharing you life.
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Some things are meant to be, SEA.  This poem nearly got me to tears.  A beautiful message of hope I derived from reading this.  I hope, indeed, that there is still angels out there intervening for those of us who somehow always seem to discount their efforts.


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RG~ awww.....thank you, Hugs right back to ya!  

Tasi~thanks!  

Corazon~ I'm glad you liked it!  

Jascanvey~ you are welcome, and thank you!  

Michael~ Thank you very much.There will always be Angels working behind the scenes.
Remember, everything happens for a reason~we just don't always know why!  
-SEA
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Sweet sentiments m'dear...angels do work in mysterious ways, don't they!!! Glad you two found each other in the end!!!!

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