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Intervening Angels
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Intervening Angels |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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So young were we when Destiny said hello there was much to see ~little did we know~ In 1984, our lives would change and bring us love~ but, "not just yet",it was decided from somewhere up above Lessons to be learned love had to be taught pain for our hearts ~these lessons~or so we thought You had to go your way I had to go my own though our path's kept crossing how could we then have known......... Ten years later....... with the ringing of your telephone ~so clear to us~ our destiny was shown We had Intervening Angels working hard to help us see our love~all along~ was always "meant to be" -SEA- |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a great story .... told by a beautiful poem.....loved it SEA |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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BSC, I thank you very much. I wrote this for my husband. It's our story~well not all, but the basics!  -SEA |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
This is lovely Sea,you have told the story so beautifully. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
How do they say Love can build a phoneline? No i got that all wrong...can build a brigde, that's it. Your poem has build a nice bridge, so fine done in word and style. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Beautiful poem SEA. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Fool~ thanks!  HelmutB~Thank you!  Mistikman~thank you kindly! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- I am a lady that adores angels in any form ... now along comes your 'Intervening Angels'. How precious this is. I'm overwhelmed with the love in this. Nice job, friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nicely said, and lived |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Oh Marge~ Thank you! I'm blushing from your sweet praise!  Beki~thanks -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The tale dreams are made of! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely done, Sea. I'm a believer in what is meant to be, will find a way to be. Looks like it happened for you. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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WhtDove~thank you~he is my dreams come true! Balladeer~Jon and I were meant to be together. We both had to grow up first. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad those angels intervened for you, SEA... for you deserve every happiness! *S* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
SEA - This is a really neat poem the way you brought in the concept that angels intervene WHEN it is time, even if we ourselves don't recognize that. Thanks for the deeper message that trusting in destiny is as important as trusting in ourselves. Nicely done, m'lady. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh i love destiny and told so well |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Whether it's destiny, fate, or intervening angels, it's nice to know that something is at work in this world that brings meaning, balance, and yes, even love into our lives. Well written! Oh yes, I wonder if there is a way to summon those Angels? Danny |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Suthern~Thank you very much! LngJhnAg~Oh, you're so nice, thank you! Walt~thanks! Danny~ you don't have to summon them, they're right there with you!Just talk to them, they hear you! Glad you liked this! -SEA |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
SEA: The magic of love - written about so beautifully.. HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
SEA your so blessed to have a love so true something others aspire too....and a nice read too !! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great, love the story, love the poem |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
SEA - another beautiful poem, thanks for sharing you life. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Some things are meant to be, SEA. This poem nearly got me to tears. A beautiful message of hope I derived from reading this. I hope, indeed, that there is still angels out there intervening for those of us who somehow always seem to discount their efforts. Michael |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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RG~ awww.....thank you, Hugs right back to ya! Tasi~thanks! Corazon~ I'm glad you liked it! Jascanvey~ you are welcome, and thank you! Michael~ Thank you very much.There will always be Angels working behind the scenes. Remember, everything happens for a reason~we just don't always know why! -SEA |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sweet sentiments m'dear...angels do work in mysterious ways, don't they!!! Glad you two found each other in the end!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
To be so blessed...I'm envious...in a GOOD way of course!... )Beautiful tribute... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
SEA- isn't it nice to live in a world where devine intervention reigns high? It is very nice to read about your experience, and to think it was a lead decision. Excellent! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Sea,This is GREAT!! Young love together again. You both are very lucky to have each other. thank you for sharing the piece of your life. I wish both of you the best for many year`s to come < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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