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Where Time Stops
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Where Time Stops |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'm passionate I feel just as well as any If better Emotions run so STRONG through my veins Pumping blood and tears Fueling my fire Urging on my passion I am passionate Feeling, Emotional, Alive! Living dramaticly in a moment Where time wraps itself around me And I stop breathing Just living that moment Like it was the end Or Begining Of my life |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Lovely words, beautiful verse.  --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think you have defined passion and intensity in one brief poem. WELL DONE! Lucky be the person who can share time and passion with you! Danny |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
and boy have you said it LoL and quite wonderfully! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Wonderfully put! To live in a moment where time seems to stand still, bravo! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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