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Where Time Stops

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JOY 14
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since 09-22-1999
Posts 1447
Wisconsin USA


0 posted 02-09-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I'm passionate
I feel just as well as any
If better
Emotions run so STRONG through my veins
Pumping blood and tears
Fueling my fire
Urging on my passion
I am passionate
Feeling,
Emotional,
Alive!
Living dramaticly in a moment
Where time wraps itself around me
And I stop breathing
Just living that moment
Like it was the end
Or
Begining
Of my life

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
Posts 1966
Sitting in Michael's Lap


1 posted 02-09-2000 02:31 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Lovely words, beautiful verse.  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


2 posted 02-09-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I think you have defined passion and intensity in one brief poem.  WELL DONE!
Lucky be the person who can share time and passion with you!
Danny
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


3 posted 02-10-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

and boy have you said it LoL and quite wonderfully!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
Tara Simms
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since 08-12-99
Posts 1285
Honea Path, SC USA


4 posted 02-11-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Wonderfully put!  To live in a moment where time seems to stand still, bravo!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


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