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The Many Faces of Me
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The Many Faces of Me |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap 
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I am the one who bears uncounted names, The masks I wear are myriad and wild; I am the Seeker, tireless, untamed, Who hurries homeward ev'ry straying child. I am the Saint, whose eyes in sorrow weep To see the evil deeds that Men perform; The Haven found, the proud and peerless Keep That offers refuge in the fiercest storm. I am the Bane of Demons, warrior strong, Dispatching Darkness with my shining blade; I am the Sage, whose memory is long, And from my whispered words are legends made. I am the Scholar, keeper of the Tome That scribes the tales of all who came before; I am the Hearth, the spirit of the home Where all may come, and find an open door. I am the Healer, she whose gentle hand Can mend all wounds, and soothe the scars of past; I am the Rock, whose fortitude shall stand Inviolate, ‘til Time has breathed his last. And I am Peace, the still and silent sea That thwarts the storm of strife with careless calm; So many masks, and ev'ry one is me – But those who know them all just call me "Mom." For all of those who started reading this expecting something else, I apologize. I was struck with a bit of an epiphany today at the hands of my beautiful children, and it ocurred to me how many mothers out there might not realize the sanctity and profundity of the title they bear. I dedicate this poem to these women -- may it serve as a tribute to you and a reminder to those around you. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Ah, motherhood, possibly the toughest but most rewarding job in the world. Or so I've heard! Great job. Your ending explains it all.  Joy |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kess~ as a mother and home schooler of 3, I related to this as if my heart wrote it. Thank you so very much. This is wonderful! -SEA |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kess, this is so well written. After reading your comment I went back for a second read and realized just how true those words are. Thanks. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i miss muh mom she died yuh....great poem |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Another wonderful poem from your talented pen. "So many masks, and ev'ry one is me". Never truer words spoken! Great poem! Danny |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kess, this is brilliant work, through and through. Your message is delivered in such a unique way, yet quite fundamental in its meaning. Excellent writing, and brimming with truth. Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I honestly didn't know what to expect with a title like that Kess, thought you might devulge some nastly lil secrets..hehe...but this is very touching!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Like a dose of good medicine to this weary mom. Thank you, thank you for reminding me... This one goes on the refrigerator, if I can find an opening, that is... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Kess if ever there was a poem describing motherhood, you've done it! Being a mother myself I wanna send you one BIG Thank You, for a tribute to all moms! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is a great poem. My mom helps me with my homework. She takes me shopping. She helps me bake and she is my best friend. Jenn |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, Kess. A mother is definitely all this...and more. A child would be lucky to have you as a mom |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful writing Kess, and a surprise at the end which I find so appropriate. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
It never fails to emaze me how well you put this in words. It flows so well yet it is a heavy subject Motherhood never seems to be easy Well done Kess The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for this brilliant tribute to motherhood. It is also a mirror of your soul, and that makes it even more beautiful Liz |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
lovely work,you got your point across in such a beautiful fashion, well done. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thank you for describing motherhood so well. Very beautiful. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Uh-huh! See, I'm not the only one with multiple personalities!!! Now why is it I get berated for it, huh??? Seriously though Kess, this speaks volumes of truth. I know my mom's capable of amazing feats! (She had to put up with me for one!!!) |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Joy, SEA, Eloise: Glad you enjoyed, and kudos to you all.  walt: I am so sorry to hear that; may this help you to cherish her memory. Danny: So that's the culprit -- my talented pen! I was wondering ...  But seriously, thank you. Claire: Just wanted to remind everyone of the little things we tend to forget. The fundamentals, as you say. devina: I divulge my dirty little secrets in ADULT, dear, not in Open! Sheesh! serenity, WhtDove: hugs to you both, you deserve them. Rex: There ya go, proof for my hypothesis. Give her a hug for me! Bal: Thank you, tell that to my kids! Just kidding -- I consider myself lucky to BE their mom ...Helmut, Liz, fool, Gemini: Thank you all, just a little introspection on a page -- glad you enjoyed! Christopher (you brat): Trust you to take something like this and twist it beyond all recognition! Humph! LOL Anyway, as far as the multiple personalities thing -- I don't berate you for THAT, I just do it cause its so gosh darned FUN ... hehehe Smooches all (cept Chris, who gets a :0P) --Kess [This message has been edited by Skyfyre (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Quite a twist and the end, there! And, power to us moms! Yea! Corinne |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... Very well said.. ...What God has made of motherhood - Let no man put asunder...  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I do so enjoy reading your poetry. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kess...you've paid a wonderful tribute to mothers everywhere with this one...thank you |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I am the Scholar, keeper of the Tome That scribes the tales of all who came before; I am the Hearth, the spirit of the home Where all may come, and find an open door. Love your insight and the rare gift you have presented with this one Kess Jennifer L. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kess- This mother's heart thanks you for recognizing all of us. Yes, we are fortunate enough to wear the SuperWoman Cape along with those masks. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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