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just_another_fe
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0 posted 02-09-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

"BABY DON'T BAIL"
THEM ARE THE WORDS YOU SAID.
WHAT WERE YOU DOING?
JUST PUTTING HOPES IN MY HEAD?
I DIDN'T WANNA GO
SO I SAID I'LL STAY
BUT THIS GAME WITH MY HEART
YOU CONTINUE TO PLAY.
YOU DON'T WANT ME
BUT YOU WON'T LET GO.
WHAT DO I DO NOW?
I DON'T KNOW. *shrugz*

"BABY DON'T BAIL"
THAT'S WHAT I HEARD YOU SAY.
YOU KNEW WHEN YOU SAID THAT
I WAS HERE TO STAY.
WHY DID YOU DO IT?
WHY ARE YOU HOLDING ME HERE?
DO YOU REALY LOVE ME
OR DO YOU JUST WANT ME NEAR?
YOU DON'T WANT ME
BUT YOU WON'T LET GO.
WHAT DO I DO NOW?
I DON'T KNOW. *shrugz*

"BABY DONT BAIL"
IT WENT FROM YOUR MOUTH TO MY EAR.
MAYBE YOU DIDN'T SAY IT
AND I JUST PRETEND TO HEAR.
DID THE WORDS COME OUT OF YOUR MOUTH?
DID THEY ENTER MY EAR?
DID YOU SAY THEM BECAUSE
THAT'S WHAT I WANTED TO HEAR?
YOU DON'T WANT ME
BUT YOU WON'T LET GO.
WHAT DO I DO KNOW?
I DON'T KNOW. *shrugz*

"BABY DON'T BAIL"
THERE IS SOMETHING I WANT YOU TO KNOW
"BABY DON'T BAIL"
CUZ I'M LETTING YOU GO.


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Majestic
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1 posted 02-09-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

wow...this is great....there's a song in there somewhere....great job.

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~


devina
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2 posted 02-09-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was great...I loved the ending...you had me wondering if you were gonna do it or should I give you the "you're better than that speech"!!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
JOY 14
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3 posted 02-09-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I agree, this would make a great song!

Joy
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4 posted 02-09-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Gotta say,I heard the song too!   -SEA
just_another_fe
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5 posted 02-09-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

god i love you guyz  your all so positive   i didn't look at it like a song but now that you guyz siad something now i also see it thank you *group hug*  

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PhaerieChild
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6 posted 02-09-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

It's a song....very lyrical, very melodious. Very well written.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


just_another_fe
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7 posted 03-25-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Thanx WildChild i didnt see the song in it when i was writing just writing the thoughts in my head  
JamesMichael
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8 posted 03-25-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"You don't want me but you won't let go" this reminds me of a relationship I was in not to long ago...and actually she did want me but only to use me and definately not for the same reasons I wanted her.  Very nice writing.   James
 
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