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Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

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PoeticKnight
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Why the Gods are against us
Iíll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of natureís law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time or so it seems
I felt like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes


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devina
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1 posted 02-09-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

As the starlight in your eyes..that line alone is beautiful!!!! You've set my heart to flutter!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 02-09-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Now that is a compliment!....thats what i like to do. I hope to do that more, this was a new one like Heaven's Fall.
Thanks Devina.
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3 posted 02-09-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML, such a romantic heart! Geez, I've melted.   Truly beautiful words! -SEA
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Thanks again SEA for the melting...
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