Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

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Open Poetry #6

Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-09 01:07 PM

Why the Gods are against us
I’ll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of nature’s law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time or so it seems
I felt like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2000-02-09 01:43 PM

As the starlight in your eyes..that line alone is beautiful!!!! You've set my heart to flutter!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2000-02-09 02:02 PM

Now that is a compliment!....thats what i like to do. I hope to do that more, this was a new one like Heaven's Fall.
Thanks Devina.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-02-09 02:22 PM

JML, such a romantic heart! Geez, I've melted.

Truly beautiful words! -SEA

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2000-02-10 09:12 AM

Thanks again SEA for the melting...

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