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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


0 posted 02-09-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt


Falling down to a bed of rose petals  
A stench of death rolled off my fingers
Drinking honey from bees sweet nectar
But it wasn't free of all the stingers

Taking to the bed of soft rose petals
And drinking a sour concocted brew
I watched good friend David Letterman
Until my eyes turned a crimson hue

I locked the door to my confinement
A self imprisonment self imposing
With the angel of death and friends around me
We napped as the fire kept us dozing

After great times of this abandon
In spring while walking down the Thames
No I have not been to California
And as to England I feel the same

I glimpsed a girl who was my maiden
She was milking cows off in the stable
To my boss I said as I woke this morn
I will come to work if I feel able

© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 02-09-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

hmmm, well I never feel able to go to work LoL, unless the work includes horses but thats another story......and living in California myself.....er nevermind, forget what I was saying.  Great poem!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
devina
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Northern Cali


2 posted 02-09-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Get to work buster!!!!! lol very nice said sir!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
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Canada


3 posted 02-09-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Just like you said it's way out there  
Good one way cool to  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Mistikman
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4 posted 02-09-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Heh, taking a trip to wonderland are we?   cool poem walt, I like it  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


5 posted 02-09-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Is this about the morning after the night before because I was there the night before and believe me it wasn't a pretty site, in fact it gave me such a headache I had to call in sick to work the next day and stay home and watch Judge Judy which just made my headache worse...

There! Whew! A WOW reply ...  

Cute poem..hope your hangover hangs on!
Sally S.
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6 posted 02-09-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Hello again...and nope, it's not about a "booger" as you call it.  (I can not believe I just wrote that)

Another ponder, ponder poem.  But, I thoroughly enjoy a poem you have to read more than once to gain the taste of it.  Well done! (er...nice boogie?) Passions (eeeks, I did it again!)
bobbycat
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7 posted 02-10-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Hmmm....I think we've all been there once or twice before....hee hee hee!        Well done!

Bobbycat =^..^=
Nan
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8 posted 02-11-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I found this lurking on page four
And thought it should stay there no more
So here I bump you back to one
Another round before you're done....
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