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Beauty of Love (as promised for the lovely Marge Tindal)

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-09-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Beauty of love

I Love the feeling of
the beauty of love
found in a close friends hug.
I love to feel the beauty of love
when a parent and a child share some family love.
I love to reveal
the desirability of love
while sharing laughs with loves happiness.
I can not conceal
the durability of love
gently yearning for a lovers fresh kiss
the one you would surely have missed
if not for the beauty of love.

And this love is like a river
thats always flowing before us endlessly.
Flowing freely in stylish splendor.
A river of love so warm and tender.
Beseeching all who care to partake
to take a chance
for eternity can never be late.
Oh, come to me my sweet lover,
let's flow together
in the beauty of love
forever and ever.

I can see the beauty of love in every heart
now craving a lovers warm caress.
and feel the beauty of love
while sharing my tenderness.
The beauty of love is romantic moonlit walks
and late night dinner talks.
And its roses for your sweetheart on valentines day
and not forgetting anniversaries in a special way.
The beauty of love will always remind
us to stop and smell the roses
and will be revealed to each of us one day
when anothers love reaches out unselfishly        
willing to meet your love halfway.

All who are willing can open wide their eyes to see
this river of love flowing so freely and magnificently.
A shining beacon which dares us to partake
of loves sweet mysteries that lie in wait.
Truly a blessing to enjoy
this beauty of love
a precious gift from the heavenly father
and given as a beautiful dove.
I love to feel the beauty of love
in a close friends hug.

Jameslee@February9,2000
forMargeTindal.thanksforthehug





[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-09-2000).]
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SEA
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1 posted 02-09-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Jmlee, this is very sweet to do for Marge. Her hugs are great!   -SEA
devina
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2 posted 02-09-2000 02:08 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is beautiful, I'm sure she's gonna love it!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Eloise
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"the beauty of love found in a close friend's hug"  I love that line.  James this is excellent.  I enjoyed the read very  much and I'm sure Marge will too. She is a sweetheart, isn't she?    
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I'm so glad each of you enjoyed my poem.  
Thank you Sea and yes her hugs are endearing and desirable.
Devina I truly hope she likes this poem.
Yes Eloise Marge is a sweetheart.  
James
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5 posted 02-09-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I'm certain that Marge will love and keep this well done poem close to her heart.
A great poem for a great person
So that's makes you a great person too then doesn't it. I would say so.

To love is to give always more then you take
You certainly have given more.


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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6 posted 02-09-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James-
That is stunningly beautiful.
Yes, of course I like it very much.
What a sweetheart you are to have come
up with such free-flowing phrases.

See, I was right !  
You DO have a romantic heart !
Bouquets to you !
~*Marge*~  


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Thank you Helmut those are very positive nice words.  I appreciate it.  
Thank you Marge for the beautiful words you have given.  You were right about the romantic heart.  Such wonderful pictures. James
"Its only words
and words are all I have
to take your heart away."
BeeGees..words..from CD One Night Only...1998
LngJhnAg
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8 posted 02-10-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

James, this poem is right on the mark.  Nice layout, too.
Echo Rhayne
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Love it!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
JamesMichael
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10 posted 02-11-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Long John for your wonderful comments.
Echo I believe you love the beauty of love.  James
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James, your poem rings true with sweet sentiment. Lovely of you to dedicate it to Marge. Hugs are made of love.  

Claire
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12 posted 02-12-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Claire.  I agree with you totally.  I will always, as many others have, enjoy Marge's hugs.  Such a compiment for you to say my poem was sweet.  I'm feeling good now.  James
 
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