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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-02-09 08:37 AM


Beauty of love

I Love the feeling of
the beauty of love
found in a close friends hug.
I love to feel the beauty of love
when a parent and a child share some family love.
I love to reveal
the desirability of love
while sharing laughs with loves happiness.
I can not conceal
the durability of love
gently yearning for a lovers fresh kiss
the one you would surely have missed
if not for the beauty of love.

And this love is like a river
thats always flowing before us endlessly.
Flowing freely in stylish splendor.
A river of love so warm and tender.
Beseeching all who care to partake
to take a chance
for eternity can never be late.
Oh, come to me my sweet lover,
let's flow together
in the beauty of love
forever and ever.

I can see the beauty of love in every heart
now craving a lovers warm caress.
and feel the beauty of love
while sharing my tenderness.
The beauty of love is romantic moonlit walks
and late night dinner talks.
And its roses for your sweetheart on valentines day
and not forgetting anniversaries in a special way.
The beauty of love will always remind
us to stop and smell the roses
and will be revealed to each of us one day
when anothers love reaches out unselfishly        
willing to meet your love halfway.

All who are willing can open wide their eyes to see
this river of love flowing so freely and magnificently.
A shining beacon which dares us to partake
of loves sweet mysteries that lie in wait.
Truly a blessing to enjoy
this beauty of love
a precious gift from the heavenly father
and given as a beautiful dove.
I love to feel the beauty of love
in a close friends hug.

Jameslee@February9,2000
forMargeTindal.thanksforthehug





[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-09-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-09 09:22 AM


Jmlee, this is very sweet to do for Marge. Her hugs are great!   -SEA
devina
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2 posted 2000-02-09 02:08 PM


This is beautiful, I'm sure she's gonna love it!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Eloise
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3 posted 2000-02-09 02:16 PM


"the beauty of love found in a close friend's hug"  I love that line.  James this is excellent.  I enjoyed the read very  much and I'm sure Marge will too. She is a sweetheart, isn't she?    
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-02-09 07:22 PM


I'm so glad each of you enjoyed my poem.  
Thank you Sea and yes her hugs are endearing and desirable.
Devina I truly hope she likes this poem.
Yes Eloise Marge is a sweetheart.  
James

HelmutB
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5 posted 2000-02-09 08:23 PM


I'm certain that Marge will love and keep this well done poem close to her heart.
A great poem for a great person
So that's makes you a great person too then doesn't it. I would say so.

To love is to give always more then you take
You certainly have given more.


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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6 posted 2000-02-09 09:15 PM


James-
That is stunningly beautiful.
Yes, of course I like it very much.
What a sweetheart you are to have come
up with such free-flowing phrases.

See, I was right !  
You DO have a romantic heart !
Bouquets to you !
~*Marge*~  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-02-10 08:37 AM


Thank you Helmut those are very positive nice words.  I appreciate it.  
Thank you Marge for the beautiful words you have given.  You were right about the romantic heart.  Such wonderful pictures. James
"Its only words
and words are all I have
to take your heart away."
BeeGees..words..from CD One Night Only...1998

LngJhnAg
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8 posted 2000-02-10 08:49 AM


James, this poem is right on the mark.  Nice layout, too.
Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 2000-02-10 06:57 PM


Love it!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2000-02-11 04:47 PM


Thank you Long John for your wonderful comments.
Echo I believe you love the beauty of love.  James

Meadowmuse
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11 posted 2000-02-11 05:02 PM


James, your poem rings true with sweet sentiment. Lovely of you to dedicate it to Marge. Hugs are made of love.  

Claire

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-02-12 08:49 AM


Thank you Claire.  I agree with you totally.  I will always, as many others have, enjoy Marge's hugs.  Such a compiment for you to say my poem was sweet.  I'm feeling good now.  James
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