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Passions Reprise .... written together with "Moonshine"

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 02-09-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Passions Reprise.


Diamond studded sky
Moonlit floor
Stardust rain
Covers the seashore
Sand grains shimmer
Forming stars in your eyes
Cool winds whisper
Of passionate reprise
Inky black waters
Lap gently on the shore
This lust I hold inside
I just can't take anymore
Like tempestuous ocean currents
My heart beats wildly for you
With no harbour of shelter
To hide from emotions so new
I am a lone boat in the darkness
Sailing uncharted waters to you
You are my lighthouse, my hope
My love ever true.


Dark Angel/Moonshine


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Moonshine
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1 posted 02-09-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for inviting me to write with you DA - I really enjoyed it and think we write well as a team - think this is one of the few poems that I've written that I actually like. Well done DA!
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 02-09-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I think this is very beautiful...you two make a good team  
WhtDove
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3 posted 02-09-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Fantastic you two!   Woohoo!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Dark Angel
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4 posted 02-09-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ruth, thanks honey glad you liked it!  
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Angel, thanks so much hon!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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5 posted 02-09-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine,Thanks so much for joining me. I enjoyed writing this poem with you and yes I think we do make a great team!! You did Well Moonshine!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 02-09-2000).]
Moonshine
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6 posted 02-09-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely compliment Hoot,
I think DA and I make a good writing duo too!
Moonshine
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7 posted 02-09-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely comment WhtDove : )
Moonshine
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8 posted 02-09-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx DA LOL we're a dynamic duo - we need those " shazam!" rings.......lol
Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 02-10-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is beautiful!  From beginning to end!  Great job both of you!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
Moonshine
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10 posted 02-10-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely compliment Echo : )
Balladeer
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11 posted 02-10-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I like it very much. It's not always easy to collaborate on a poem and make it come out smoothly but you two have done it well. Congrats!!
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 02-10-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I'm very impressed with the
results of this teamship.
Nice job, indeed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mike
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I like, nicely done.
Dark Angel
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14 posted 02-11-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Balladeer, Marge and Mike. Thank you so very much for your lovely and kind replies.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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15 posted 02-12-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely comments Balladeer, Marge and Mike : )
Balladeer, no it isn't easy to write with someone else and have the work come out smooth but DA and I seemed really in sync with this one - I think it was the weather lol
Beki
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16 posted 02-12-2000 04:29 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Excellent collaboration, two wonderful voices blended well here..Bravo!
Moonshine
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17 posted 02-12-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply and lovely compliment Beki.
Poet deVine
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18 posted 02-12-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Marvelous! I love this... you both are to be congratulated!  
Moonshine
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19 posted 02-12-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your encouragement and lovely compliment PDV.
 
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