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Passions Reprise .... written together with "Moonshine"
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Passions Reprise .... written together with "Moonshine" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Passions Reprise. Diamond studded sky Moonlit floor Stardust rain Covers the seashore Sand grains shimmer Forming stars in your eyes Cool winds whisper Of passionate reprise Inky black waters Lap gently on the shore This lust I hold inside I just can't take anymore Like tempestuous ocean currents My heart beats wildly for you With no harbour of shelter To hide from emotions so new I am a lone boat in the darkness Sailing uncharted waters to you You are my lighthouse, my hope My love ever true. Dark Angel/Moonshine What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for inviting me to write with you DA - I really enjoyed it and think we write well as a team - think this is one of the few poems that I've written that I actually like. Well done DA! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I think this is very beautiful...you two make a good team  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fantastic you two! Woohoo!<*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth, thanks honey glad you liked it! ----------------- Angel, thanks so much hon!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine,Thanks so much for joining me. I enjoyed writing this poem with you and yes I think we do make a great team!! You did Well Moonshine!! < !signature-->What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 02-09-2000).] |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely compliment Hoot, I think DA and I make a good writing duo too! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely comment WhtDove : ) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx DA LOL we're a dynamic duo - we need those " shazam!" rings.......lol |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful! From beginning to end! Great job both of you! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely compliment Echo : ) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it very much. It's not always easy to collaborate on a poem and make it come out smoothly but you two have done it well. Congrats!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I'm very impressed with the results of this teamship. Nice job, indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I like, nicely done. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Balladeer, Marge and Mike. Thank you so very much for your lovely and kind replies. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely comments Balladeer, Marge and Mike : ) Balladeer, no it isn't easy to write with someone else and have the work come out smooth but DA and I seemed really in sync with this one - I think it was the weather lol |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Excellent collaboration, two wonderful voices blended well here..Bravo! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply and lovely compliment Beki. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous! I love this... you both are to be congratulated!  |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your encouragement and lovely compliment PDV. |
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