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just_another_fe
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0 posted 02-09-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

She left the ones she cared about
for something left unknown.
Telling the enemy her secrets
while bullets were being thrown.
Guns were going off
and bombs were being dropped.
As she runs to hide
it feels like time has all but stopped.
The enemy just found her.
Gun shot through the heart.
Now her life is over
and thats the sadest part.
She has gone to a better place....above
There she lays "A soldier of love".


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
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1 posted 02-09-2000 05:11 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

A remembrance here that love sometimes hurts.....but the sad part is.....It shouldn't have to.  Well written on a good topic  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Justbleu
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2 posted 02-09-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is a challenge I gave in Poetry challenge everyone!!  

This is kinda cool!!!  You met the challenge!!

Take Care
Bridgette  


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
jascanvey
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3 posted 02-09-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Angie, this is really good! Bravo *clapping hands*
Majestic
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4 posted 02-09-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

this is really good....thanks for the read..

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~


JamesMichael
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5 posted 02-09-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A very passionate soldier of love
so willing to give her life for this love.
James
Justbleu
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I had to come back and read it again... of the two... this one is my favorite!!!  
This soldier is definatly one of deep love!!

Thank You
Bridgette
HelmutB
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7 posted 02-10-2000 05:41 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Excellent poem you did
Didn't know what the challange was but I liked it anyhow

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 02-10-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This one is my favorite out of the two as well!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
just_another_fe
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THANKS EVERYONE THIS IS ALSO MY FAVORITE ONE I DIDNT CARE FOR THE FIRST ONE SO I DECIDED TO RE WRITE IT.   THE CHALLANGE WAS TO WRITE ABOUT THE TOPIC "A SOLDIER OF LOVE"

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JamesMichael
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10 posted 11-24-2002 01:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
 
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