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just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN


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The soul of war lay upon her soul.
Love has finally taken its toll.
Her face was wet, soaked with tears.
No one under stood her pain or fears.
Her eyes were red - pepper spray???
She had been crying all damn day.
So hard to breathe, shes gasping for air.
She thought they made the "perfect pair".
Her heart was broke, shattered like glass.
Would this feeling ever pass?
As she looks in the mirror
what does she see?
A solier of love is staring back at me.
© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 02-09-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed reading this.  It was put together very well.  James
Majestic
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2 posted 02-09-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

this has great imagery....great work....

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~


Justbleu
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So often one is misunderstood when it comes to matters of the heart!!  I liked the way she saw herself in the mirror and saw a "Soldier of Love"!!  Nicely done!!

Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 02-10-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Great response to the challenge!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
 
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