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fool
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0 posted 02-08-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fool


With a sigh
we make the parting words our own
eyes locked, hearts torn,souls crying,
Our hands dance against each other
as if somehow, by touching
we can hold onto it, save it,keep it

But as your voice
caresses me for the last time,
I realise we are memory,
and the glory that was our love
shall leave no lasting monument
to its passing.

Still we speak, our words falling
like rain around us
gathering in crystal pools at our feet
glittering with reflections of you and me.

The dance of our hands ends
their quiet symphony slowing
giving way to stillness
upon each other's faces.

The storm of our words
drifts away
there's nothing left to say
and the stillness is complete.

As I watch you walk away
our parting words spoken
and flowing to the gutters
at my feet
I know now
I want no one anymore.
© Copyright 2000 fool - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


1 posted 02-08-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome to the family...and remember to keep faith..."no one" might turn into "someone" someday!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Mistikman
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since 01-10-2000
Posts 729
San Jose, CA, USA


2 posted 02-08-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Great first poem, Welcome to Passions, may your stay here be long and fruitful  

ps. Remember, dont feed the moderators  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
Posts 385
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>


3 posted 02-08-2000 11:51 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

This is both very sad and beautiful.
"Better to have loved and lost,
than to have never loved at all"
or something like that.
You WILL find love again and you
will learn form this,your past experience.
Keep on writing, time and writing can heal
ANYTHING oh of course if you have
Jesus in you !!
WELCOME TO THE FORUM
Poet deVine
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since 05-26-99
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Hurricane Alley


4 posted 02-09-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome! Glad to see you made it! Very haunting poem you've entered with...but very good...(don't listen to Mistikman!) I look forward to reading more from you.  
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


5 posted 02-09-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Welcome to Passions, just dont feed mistikman, everyone else is ok.  

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
fool
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since 02-07-2000
Posts 110


6 posted 02-09-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

I just wanted to thankyou all
for the warm welcome,Im amazed
at the positive atmosphere you
have here,its great.A special
mention to poetdevine,thankyou
for the encouragement ok  
serenity blaze
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since 02-02-2000
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7 posted 02-09-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Oh wow...I think I just read the poem I've been trying to write.  Guess I'll give it up now, you said it all for me.  PERFECTLY.
SEA
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with you


8 posted 02-09-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Fool~ Welcome!   This was painful yet written beautifully!-SEA
Martie
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9 posted 02-09-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

very well written poem here.  I enjoyed the read.
Meadowmuse
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since 12-27-1999
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10 posted 02-09-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is lovely...you've created such a stirring scene with this piece...sensual, tactile, aching. Welcome, and thanks for sharing this one here.

Claire
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