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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
With a sigh we make the parting words our own eyes locked, hearts torn,souls crying, Our hands dance against each other as if somehow, by touching we can hold onto it, save it,keep it But as your voice caresses me for the last time, I realise we are memory, and the glory that was our love shall leave no lasting monument to its passing. Still we speak, our words falling like rain around us gathering in crystal pools at our feet glittering with reflections of you and me. The dance of our hands ends their quiet symphony slowing giving way to stillness upon each other's faces. The storm of our words drifts away there's nothing left to say and the stillness is complete. As I watch you walk away our parting words spoken and flowing to the gutters at my feet I know now I want no one anymore. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Welcome to the family...and remember to keep faith..."no one" might turn into "someone" someday!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great first poem, Welcome to Passions, may your stay here be long and fruitful  ps. Remember, dont feed the moderators I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
This is both very sad and beautiful. "Better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all" or something like that. You WILL find love again and you will learn form this,your past experience. Keep on writing, time and writing can heal ANYTHING oh of course if you have Jesus in you !! WELCOME TO THE FORUM |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! Glad to see you made it! Very haunting poem you've entered with...but very good...(don't listen to Mistikman!) I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to Passions, just dont feed mistikman, everyone else is ok. Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
I just wanted to thankyou all for the warm welcome,Im amazed at the positive atmosphere you have here,its great.A special mention to poetdevine,thankyou for the encouragement ok |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh wow...I think I just read the poem I've been trying to write. Guess I'll give it up now, you said it all for me. PERFECTLY. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Fool~ Welcome! This was painful yet written beautifully!-SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
very well written poem here. I enjoyed the read. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is lovely...you've created such a stirring scene with this piece...sensual, tactile, aching. Welcome, and thanks for sharing this one here. Claire |
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