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So tenderly

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-08-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

So tenderly

Ann can
do it to me.
Ann can
work me up and down
so passionately.
I liked her
when I met her.
Now I simply
can't forget her.
Tenderly Ann touches my heart
requesting a fresh romantic start.
A woman to Love and appreciate.
Her love to share
impossible for me to wait.
Fresh love
now I see
offered anew
each time we meet.
Only one can reach me
this passionately.
Ann can
so tenderly.

Jameslee@February8,2000forAnn

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devina
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1 posted 02-08-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is so sweet James...this Ann of yours sounds like quite a catch...you hold on tight dear, and may love be with you!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
First__Knight
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2 posted 02-08-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

I like the format.....I has a great style  

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-09-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thanks devina...hey, I'm willing but how willing is ann?
Thanks first knight for the compliment.  James
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4 posted 02-09-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James, Ann is one lucky girl! Wow! So passionate! -SEA
Martie
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5 posted 02-09-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lovely poem, lovely love.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-10-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you sea and martie I appreciate your interest in my poem.  James
Michael
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7 posted 02-10-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A sweet and beautiful poem, James.  What do you mean "How willing is Ann?"  Only one way to find out...and like Devina said, "Hold On".  


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8 posted 02-10-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Evad   Email Evad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Evad

James:
Very nice.  I can feel what your feelings are in the words that you apply.
How does Ann feel about you?
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9 posted 02-10-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James-
There's that romanticism again.
Shining brightly within your words.

How willing is Ann?
Catch her if you can.
Then you'll know
if Ann can
romance her man.
~*Marge*~


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Ann is a very lucky lady!  Wonderful poem, James, keep it up!

Kyttn
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Thank you Michael for your nice comments.  I only mean that I am very confident about my feelings for Ann but as of this moment I am not as confident about the feelings Ann has for me.  Ann wants to take her time to get to know me and she wants to see if she likes my personality, and so forth, and of course Ann is right and I need to keep pace with Ann.  You can't hurry love.  I wrote a poem which I will post called "All by myself" and this is the way my heart feels right now.
Evad and Marge this is something the future holds and only Anns heart knows.  Believe me I am doing my part to win Ann's heart.
Thank you Kyttn I appreciate your nice comment.  I appreciate all the wonderful comments with all my heart.   James
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12 posted 02-10-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is beautiful, some day I am going to inspire poetry from a man lol....and someday......oh well.......  
JamesMichael
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13 posted 02-12-2000 06:45 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you corazon for saying that my poem was beautiful.  I appreciate that.  I believe that you will inspire many men to write poetry for you.  May all your poetic fantasies, dreams, and desires come true.  James
 
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