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So tenderly
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So tenderly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So tenderly Ann can do it to me. Ann can work me up and down so passionately. I liked her when I met her. Now I simply can't forget her. Tenderly Ann touches my heart requesting a fresh romantic start. A woman to Love and appreciate. Her love to share impossible for me to wait. Fresh love now I see offered anew each time we meet. Only one can reach me this passionately. Ann can so tenderly. Jameslee@February8,2000forAnn |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is so sweet James...this Ann of yours sounds like quite a catch...you hold on tight dear, and may love be with you!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I like the format.....I has a great style  There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks devina...hey, I'm willing but how willing is ann? Thanks first knight for the compliment. James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James, Ann is one lucky girl! Wow! So passionate! -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely poem, lovely love. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you sea and martie I appreciate your interest in my poem. James |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A sweet and beautiful poem, James. What do you mean "How willing is Ann?" Only one way to find out...and like Devina said, "Hold On". Michael |
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Evad Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 12 |
James: Very nice. I can feel what your feelings are in the words that you apply. How does Ann feel about you? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James- There's that romanticism again. Shining brightly within your words. How willing is Ann? Catch her if you can. Then you'll know if Ann can romance her man.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kyttn Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 10MO |
Ann is a very lucky lady! Wonderful poem, James, keep it up! Kyttn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Michael for your nice comments. I only mean that I am very confident about my feelings for Ann but as of this moment I am not as confident about the feelings Ann has for me. Ann wants to take her time to get to know me and she wants to see if she likes my personality, and so forth, and of course Ann is right and I need to keep pace with Ann. You can't hurry love. I wrote a poem which I will post called "All by myself" and this is the way my heart feels right now. Evad and Marge this is something the future holds and only Anns heart knows. Believe me I am doing my part to win Ann's heart. Thank you Kyttn I appreciate your nice comment. I appreciate all the wonderful comments with all my heart. James |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, some day I am going to inspire poetry from a man lol....and someday......oh well....... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you corazon for saying that my poem was beautiful. I appreciate that. I believe that you will inspire many men to write poetry for you. May all your poetic fantasies, dreams, and desires come true. James |
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