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Only She Will Ever Know

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-08-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Itís nice to live in a world
Without a doubt
That she is the girl
I cannot live without

As long as she needs me
And changes never
Iím thinking of her only
And giving her forever
Only she really knows
My heartís special place
Where my thoughts sometimes go
And can never be replaced

Wherever she may run
I know Iíll be there
With her, the one
Whoís life I share
All she has to do is ask
And Iíll fall upon my knees
So she can remove this mask
And the little pieces of me

Tonight the lightning strikes
And a new wind blows
Bringing a certain calm she likes
That only she will ever know

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Mistikman
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1 posted 02-08-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Excellent poem, I love the part about removing the mask. It is true that only those we truly love can see us for who we truly are.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
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2 posted 02-09-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML, you did it to me again, you melted my heart! This is so sweet!   -SEA
PoeticKnight
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3 posted 02-09-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

SEA - I'm sorry about the melting, hope it isn't messy *S*.
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 02-09-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I agree with Mistikman's comments.  I would add that we show more of ourselves to those we truly love, because real love opens the heart and mind.
Nice Poem!
Danny
devina
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5 posted 02-09-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've fallen hard haven't you???? hehe...this is lovely!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
just_another_fe
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this is a great poam i would have to agree with everyone else  
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 02-10-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

So well said JML

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
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