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Jason Danes
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since 2000-02-07
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0 posted 2000-02-08 05:49 PM


A Roses Reflection of Love
By: Jason Danes


Love is like a rose
Growing day by day
Sometimes it buds and flowers
And sometimes just wilts away

At first it seems so beautiful
Its' colors gleem so bright
Taking in all the attention
The sun gives it with it's light

But when the seasons change
The rose begins to morn
Then it drops its' flower
And shows its' spiney thorn

If it's not kept properly
And covered from the frost
Then the rose is soon to die
And will be forever lost


Sometimes the best poems come from the heart!


[This message has been edited by Jason Danes (edited 02-09-2000).]

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2000-02-08 05:58 PM


Well spoken Jason... wise words concerning love and roses.  May your heart never be bitten by the frost of winter... and welcome to our poetic halls.
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
2 posted 2000-02-08 06:08 PM


Welcome to Passions Jason.  A very beautiful analogy love and the rose.
Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
3 posted 2000-02-08 11:26 PM


nice poem....thanks for the read....

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-02-08 11:38 PM


Excellent flow! Great thoughts! Love it!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
5 posted 2000-02-09 04:08 PM


So beautiful Jason!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-02-09 07:10 PM


This is a nice poem Jason..just in time for Valentine's Day.  

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