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Love is
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Love is |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
It is a feeling you cannot describe No matter how hard you try Words don’t come as easy as before Though you want to say more And the pain cuts away at your heart Whenever you are apart It is a feeling that grows Through the highs and lows Whether you’re together or far away It grows every day And everything in nature sings Of beautiful things While risking the pain Of falling rain Yet, another day comes along With an even better song But you can’t possibly hear, Nothing matters to ears That don’t care for anything except The feeling you get When you hear that soft sound Turns you around Because it’s from the voice; The person of your choice Whose vision controls every thought And for whom you sought Through years of loneliness Now there’s happiness And at last the meaning is clear Wipe away the tears Understand that life is a journey Of insecurity Unless you have someone Together as one Helping the journey and to understand While walking hand in hand Love breathes Breath of life from afar Love lasts As eternal as you are Love shines Bright white burning star Love is Nothing less, and nothing more |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I think you've hit the nail on the head exactly...great job.  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks Bobbycat. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well said and nicely done May love be always your # 1 A hammer and a nail perhaps Flowers and poerty get you further, any bets just kidding around bobbycat The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, so very nice, this is great! -SEA |
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Evad Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 12 |
Extremely moving. I really do like it. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Boy have you said it Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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