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Melody of My Heart #1 (answer to my own challenge)

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Sven
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Melody of my heart, song of my life
You came into my life without warning
Dispelling my darkness with your light

You filled my heart with the beauty of your song
Bringing my discordant life into harmony again
Sharing with me notes I had not heard in so long

From the discarded sketches of my life you found a symphony
A work of art and of life long forgotten
Found the scattered pages on the floor and gave them back to me

My life is so much better now that you have come
I no longer fear the darkness as I once did
For now I have you here, filling my life with sun

Melody of my heart, song of my life
Teach me again the song long forgotten
Fill my days with your music, and with artistry fill my nights.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-16-2000).]
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SEA
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Sven, this is simply wonderful!   -SEA
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Well done Sven, I really enjoyed the read.
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Well said Sven...or should we say "Mr. LOVE"!!!??

This is right from the heart, yep, I can tell!! Best luck in the world to you hun!!!



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4 posted 02-09-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful Sven!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
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"Melody of my heart, song of my life"... Nice one...
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Sven-
Lovely, to be sure.

When you croon a melody,
I feel you're singing just for me.
Do you mind if I hum along?
This just might be my song.

~*Marge*~


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7 posted 02-09-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

This is wonderful.
And this line sends me dreaming!

...Fill my days with your music, and with artistry fill my nights.

So Lovely!


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This is beautiful Sven, well done!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
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I loved this one very much.
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