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Evad
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-02-08 01:10 PM


As the sun rose and the waves crashed ashore,
My love for you grew stronger and so much more.
The full moon still showed its face,
Racing for the night to embrace.
As the white caps travel up the sand,
I only envision us hand in hand.
We felt the cool morning breeze around all peaceful,
I look into your eyes and said "You are Beautiful".
Time will forever stand still for us,
For soulmates and true loves it is a plus.


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Member Seraphic
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with you
1 posted 2000-02-08 01:12 PM


Evad, WELCOME!! This is really sweet. I enjoyed it! Will look for more from you!   -SEA
January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-08 01:39 PM


Dave, umm, I mean Evad:
This is beautiful and has me longing for summer shore days again.  Welcome.  

HelmutB
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
3 posted 2000-02-08 02:29 PM


Welcome to passion with such passionate poem you came.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 2000-02-09 02:03 AM


Welcome to passions, great poem!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


White Wolf
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland
5 posted 2000-02-09 03:36 AM


Welcome, welcome, welcome.  Hold on a sec, I need to get the sand out from between my toes....There all clean.  Very nicely done.  I like it.  I hope there is more from where that came from.  Oh did I mention, welcome to passions?  

 Poet: An individual that can transfer what is in the heart onto paper.



dash rendor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21

6 posted 2000-02-09 04:01 AM


Welcome to passions.  Im new here to but i have not posted yet.  Im glad ive waited.  Now i see how skillfully i will have to write.  Nice poem, i look foward to reading more of your work.
Evad
Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 12

7 posted 2000-02-09 08:48 AM


January Flowers:

You are soooo perspective!

January Flowers
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
8 posted 2000-02-09 09:17 PM


Perceptive, too.
Except when it's precipitating.
Then I'm pragmatic.

Takes one to know one, Evad, I used to be backwards, too.  

Again, Welcome to Passions, with a "P".

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
9 posted 2000-02-09 10:54 PM


WELCOME!  Painted the ocean scene for me!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

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