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As The Sun Rose

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Evad
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0 posted 02-08-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Evad   Email Evad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Evad

As the sun rose and the waves crashed ashore,
My love for you grew stronger and so much more.
The full moon still showed its face,
Racing for the night to embrace.
As the white caps travel up the sand,
I only envision us hand in hand.
We felt the cool morning breeze around all peaceful,
I look into your eyes and said "You are Beautiful".
Time will forever stand still for us,
For soulmates and true loves it is a plus.

© Copyright 2000 Evad - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you


1 posted 02-08-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Evad, WELCOME!! This is really sweet. I enjoyed it! Will look for more from you!   -SEA
January Flowers
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since 02-01-2000
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2 posted 02-08-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Dave, umm, I mean Evad:
This is beautiful and has me longing for summer shore days again.  Welcome.  
HelmutB
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3 posted 02-08-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Welcome to passion with such passionate poem you came.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 02-09-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Welcome to passions, great poem!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


5 posted 02-09-2000 03:36 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Welcome, welcome, welcome.  Hold on a sec, I need to get the sand out from between my toes....There all clean.  Very nicely done.  I like it.  I hope there is more from where that came from.  Oh did I mention, welcome to passions?  

 Poet: An individual that can transfer what is in the heart onto paper.


dash rendor
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since 01-30-2000
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6 posted 02-09-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for dash rendor   Email dash rendor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dash rendor

Welcome to passions.  Im new here to but i have not posted yet.  Im glad ive waited.  Now i see how skillfully i will have to write.  Nice poem, i look foward to reading more of your work.
Evad
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7 posted 02-09-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for Evad   Email Evad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Evad

January Flowers:

You are soooo perspective!
January Flowers
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8 posted 02-09-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Perceptive, too.
Except when it's precipitating.
Then I'm pragmatic.

Takes one to know one, Evad, I used to be backwards, too.  

Again, Welcome to Passions, with a "P".
WhtDove
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9 posted 02-09-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  Painted the ocean scene for me!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
 
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