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Shelley
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25 posted 02-09-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

Intriged by the title, captured by the first stanza and by the forth my heart sank. As a mother, this is my biggest fear. I didn't want to finish reading it, but with tear filled eyes I did. You did an excellent job Marge.
Breathe~
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26 posted 02-09-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Wow..I'm shaking...

This one hit home Marge...

Very beautiful...


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
Marge Tindal
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27 posted 02-09-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Saxoness-
Thank you for your comments.
Tori-
Bless you for the thoughts.
Mike-
Always nice to have you reading.
SEA-
Thank you.  Life writes the words,
I use to 'move' you.
Corazon-
I, too, hope it never is a reality for any mother.
Hoot-
I know that you 'feel' my writing.
Michael-
Thank you for sharing your feelings.
Echo-
Thanks, hon.  I needed that *hug*
Andrew-
I'm pleased that you found it worthy.
Eloise-
If my relating this experience caused you to call and hug your children, then it was well-shared.
MeadowMuse-
Reflections that can touch someone else need to be shared.  
Thank you.
Skyfyre-
Thank you for the hugs.
Mistikman-
It is a difficult task in life.
Elizabeth, my friend-
'Real' is the emotion most found in my inkwell. Thank you for all you say.
Seymour-
Thank you, my friend.
Devina-
Remember your tears ... hug someone you love.
Martie-
I shared my mother's pain ... but I can't imagine the intensity for her.
Majestic-
Keep the hugs and kisses going.
David-
You touch my heart with your understanding.
WhiteDove-
Thank you for your comments.
BobbyCat-
Hold him tight.
Slinger-
You expressed it well, my friend.
Marilyn-
May it never be any mother, is my wish.
Shelley-
Thank you for your thoughts.
Breathe~
*Hugs* to you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


JamesMichael
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28 posted 02-09-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I'm sorry Marge.  This is a very sad and lonely part of our lives.   So beautifully written.  James
Marge Tindal
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29 posted 04-23-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James~
I was perusing the archives of #6
and was pleased to find your response
on this poem.
Thanking you for your kind and loving
heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

UndyingLove
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30 posted 04-24-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for UndyingLove   Email UndyingLove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit UndyingLove's Home Page   View IP for UndyingLove

Marge,
This poem is wonderful!  Reminds me of a friend that I have that passed away the day before Mother's Day five years ago.  It really hits home!

 
Marge Tindal
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31 posted 04-25-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amy~
My heart was very pleased to see that your first post was on this loving tribute to my brother and my mother.
Thank you for your kindness.

When I tried to visit your homepage through the link you provided .. it wouldn't take me there ... so I copied and pasted your site into my browser and added the http:// to it.
It worked ... you might want to go back in to your profile and add the http:// to the URL address so that others can visit and see your pages.

I'm so pleased to meet you.
Your Christian following is simply a wonderful thing.
I'm going to also e-mail you just in case you don't happen back to read this.
Much love and success to you in your endeavors.
Sisters in Christ ...
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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loveya
Marge Tindal
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33 posted 06-30-2004 01:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

These are the days of remember ... Mike's birth-of-day was June 20th ... the day of his passing is quickly approaching ... July 3rd ... it just doesn't seem fair~

I will cry again the tender tears of a sister who misses the quick smile and soft laughter of a brother who was so loved~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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34 posted 07-02-2007 07:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


Just another *sigh*

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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