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When you realize there is nothing to realize

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Jone
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since 02-05-2000
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0 posted 02-07-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

When I'm down,
I want to stay down.
When I'm up,
I want to stay up.

When I am down,
It is so hard to get up.
When I am up,
It is SO easy to go down.

You look at your life,
From a perspective of your own.
Your perspectives are wrong,
Your interpretation is faulted,
Your look at your life,
Wrong.

You finally think,
Why are things the way they are.
What did I do to deserve this.

Finally you realize,
Things are looking up,
You are happier,
You smile more,
Your life is improving.

Then you realize,
Things aren't looking up,
Your happiness is arrogant,
Your smile, irrelevent,
Your life still sucks.

You finally realize,
The first time your realize,
It is unimportant.
The only realization that matters...

This is the realization,
That in your life,
There is nothing to realize.

You may dissagree,
You may beg to differ,
You may laugh out loud.

But you just don't realize,
Once you realize that,
That there is nothing to realize.

At that point,
Your life will be sad,
Pathetic,
Painful.

You will be happy,
You will smile,
Your life will improve.

This will happen.
Once you realize,
That your realizations,
They are all meaningless.

There is only one important realization.
When you realize,
That there is something to realize,
That is when you will be happy,
When you will smile.
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Cuddlez
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since 11-27-1999
Posts 434
Walla Walla, WA 99362


1 posted 02-08-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Interesting thought and layout.
Looks like I have the honor of being the first to reply )~
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


2 posted 02-08-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I have been there before! Up and down, but when you think about this you have to realize life does get better. All in what you make of it! Hope yours goes up!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


3 posted 02-08-2000 12:04 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Interesting way to look at things...I myself know what it is like to be up and down and how easy and hard each is and so forth!  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

 
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