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Jone
Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 41


0 posted 2000-02-07 11:05 PM


When I'm down,
I want to stay down.
When I'm up,
I want to stay up.

When I am down,
It is so hard to get up.
When I am up,
It is SO easy to go down.

You look at your life,
From a perspective of your own.
Your perspectives are wrong,
Your interpretation is faulted,
Your look at your life,
Wrong.

You finally think,
Why are things the way they are.
What did I do to deserve this.

Finally you realize,
Things are looking up,
You are happier,
You smile more,
Your life is improving.

Then you realize,
Things aren't looking up,
Your happiness is arrogant,
Your smile, irrelevent,
Your life still sucks.

You finally realize,
The first time your realize,
It is unimportant.
The only realization that matters...

This is the realization,
That in your life,
There is nothing to realize.

You may dissagree,
You may beg to differ,
You may laugh out loud.

But you just don't realize,
Once you realize that,
That there is nothing to realize.

At that point,
Your life will be sad,
Pathetic,
Painful.

You will be happy,
You will smile,
Your life will improve.

This will happen.
Once you realize,
That your realizations,
They are all meaningless.

There is only one important realization.
When you realize,
That there is something to realize,
That is when you will be happy,
When you will smile.

© Copyright 2000 Jone - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2000-02-08 12:17 PM


Interesting thought and layout.
Looks like I have the honor of being the first to reply )~

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-08 12:19 PM


I have been there before! Up and down, but when you think about this you have to realize life does get better. All in what you make of it! Hope yours goes up!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 2000-02-08 12:04 PM


Interesting way to look at things...I myself know what it is like to be up and down and how easy and hard each is and so forth!  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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