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my love |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" My Love " Lost in your eyes I am every day Seeing you here Next to me close Inside my heart Beats the love you boast Having you Holding me next to your heart Listening to your being Telling me im yours Kissing your lips Feeling your soul Pouring into me love From your heart so gold Awake next to your face Image of beauty laying next to me Giving you love thats ment to be Each day that passes More I do know My life is wonderful Cause of what you are A loving man With an extrodinary heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, Extrodinary poem. Very emotional, I enjoyed the read. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very good job. You sound like a lucky girl. Or is he the lucky man? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey- Loving thoughts. Happiness abounds. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
There is nothing better than being in LOVE No song, No laugh No Whiskey, No Tear No Sunrise, No Beer (Tequilla perhaps lol) But wait there is one thing that is better And it ain't weather It is to read your poem there Dove Nothing is better than a woman in LOVE The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Loved it! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A great poem, whiskey. Leaves you with a fulfilling sigh. Michael |
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