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whiskey
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" My Love "

Lost in your eyes
I am every day
Seeing you here
Next to me close
Inside my heart
Beats the love you boast
Having you
Holding me next to your heart
Listening to your being
Telling me im yours
Kissing your lips
Feeling your soul
Pouring into me love
From your heart so gold
Awake next to your face
Image of beauty laying next to me
Giving you love thats ment to be
Each day that passes
More I do know
My life is wonderful
Cause of what you are
A loving man
With an extrodinary heart

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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Whiskey,
Extrodinary poem. Very emotional, I enjoyed the read.
Cuddlez
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Very good job. You sound like a lucky girl. Or is he the lucky man?

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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Whiskey-
Loving thoughts.
Happiness abounds.
~*Marge*~


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There is nothing better than being in LOVE
No song, No laugh
No Whiskey, No Tear
No Sunrise, No Beer (Tequilla perhaps lol)
But wait there is one thing that is better
And it ain't weather
It is to read your poem there Dove
Nothing is better than a woman in LOVE



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Echo Rhayne
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Loved it!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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A great poem, whiskey.  Leaves you with a fulfilling sigh.  


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