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monique
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0 posted 02-07-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique

I realize that Poetry #5 is only for reply and now we have to post on Poetry #6
So here be it.
Bonsoir again
Mes Amis of
Tomorrow is a better day
Allowing me to be
Mes Amis on line
Stretched out to eternity and back
Knowing my thoughts
Pouring down like rain
On my back to the door
Looking at you
Telling me the flowers
Of your garden so
Tenderly well taking care

My field is filled
With eyes on the screen
Looking for truth
In people's heart
Amen

monique


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 02-07-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Written the way prayers should be--sweet & simple.  Delightful monique, I liked this much.
Rex Allen McCoy
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I like this poem ... your blending of the two languages is a nice touch ... although I'll have to get my wife or kids to explain the french before I can truely understand the whole poem  
I can only speak english
I'm so dumb

Rex}<{{{{o>
monique
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3 posted 02-08-2000 03:42 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Please don't say you're so dumb.
You are a brilliant person to me.
monique
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Monique

It's so great to see your unique poetry here .... and see you again ....

Philip
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5 posted 02-08-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Wonderful Monique!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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