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Open Poetry #6

I realize

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-02-07 09:29 PM

I realize that Poetry #5 is only for reply and now we have to post on Poetry #6
So here be it.
Bonsoir again
Mes Amis of
Tomorrow is a better day
Allowing me to be
Mes Amis on line
Stretched out to eternity and back
Knowing my thoughts
Pouring down like rain
On my back to the door
Looking at you
Telling me the flowers
Of your garden so
Tenderly well taking care

My field is filled
With eyes on the screen
Looking for truth
In people's heart
Amen

monique

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-02-07 09:51 PM

Written the way prayers should be--sweet & simple. Delightful monique, I liked this much.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2000-02-07 10:31 PM

I like this poem ... your blending of the two languages is a nice touch ... although I'll have to get my wife or kids to explain the french before I can truely understand the whole poem

I can only speak english
I'm so dumb

Rex}<{{{{o>

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

3 posted 2000-02-08 03:42 AM

Please don't say you're so dumb.
You are a brilliant person to me.
monique

Poertree
Senior Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 1359
UK

4 posted 2000-02-08 06:57 AM

Monique

It's so great to see your unique poetry here .... and see you again ....

Philip

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

5 posted 2000-02-08 12:17 PM

Wonderful Monique!!

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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