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Sally S.
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0 posted 02-07-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.


If thou hast wandered ever so far
To make thee thy bride with unseen scar
I beg thee forgive my weeping heart,
For how could thou know this cursed fate?
Oh, wandering warrior, I fear 'tis too late.

My man of arms...Oh, how quickly we fade
Unto the dawn of departed day.
I beg thee, forgive thy weeping heart.
I am not worthy, yet less I am fair
To be forsaken in thy charming care.

Withering soul of depleated lust burn,
Burn whispering fire, feel sovereign spurn.
I beg thee, forgive thy weeping heart.
Thou hast awakened to encroachment, disbelief.
Though within this, my dearest, sweet relief.

For low, thy heart unworthy of true love.
Scorned nevermore.  Take thee to heaven above.

I beg thee, forgive...







[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 02-07-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-07-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sally-
Positively lovely.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 02-07-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow! Excellent..I love this Sally....you've come back with a vengence!  
Breathe~
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3 posted 02-07-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Enchanting...very lovely...

 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
WhtDove
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4 posted 02-07-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sally you've done a terrific job!  

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Mike
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5 posted 02-07-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed very much... well done.
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6 posted 02-07-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sally, this style really suits you well! Wonderful job, lady fair  
Sally S.
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7 posted 02-07-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Thank you all for the encouraging replies.  I won't tell you how long this poem took to write...LOL.  (not very) Perhaps I should spend more time on my poetry.  One could end up with a masterpiece!!  
Again, my thanks.
Cuddlez
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8 posted 02-07-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I love the imagery and format... Makes me feel like I'm reading a old-time, "forbidden" diary entry

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
bobbycat
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9 posted 02-07-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Lovely poem....I liked the lilt it had--it flowed very smoothly....I am envious!  

Bobbycat =^..^=
Michael
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10 posted 02-08-2000 04:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exceptional work, Sally.  This one grabbed at me deep down.  I really enjoyed it.

Michael
tracie66
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11 posted 02-08-2000 06:17 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sally this was extremely beautiful, I love this sort of poetry I only with I had the talent to write this way...Looking out for more of your work.         Tracie
tracie66
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Sally you are so talented. I only wish I could write like that. You have written a beautiful piece      Tracie    

I will be looking out for more of your work

OOPS I DIDN'T THINK THAT MY FIRST ONE WENT. SORRY NOW YOU HAVE 2 FROM ME  

[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-08-2000).]
Echo Rhayne
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13 posted 02-08-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

this is great Sally...all I can say is wow

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Nan
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14 posted 02-09-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sally - sock it to 'em with the wonderful archaic language... I absolutely love it...
Sally S.
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15 posted 02-09-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

**curtsies ever so demurely**

Thank you.  I really enjoy this type of poetry. Writing it myself was an added bonus.  LoL  

I'm glad y'all liked it.  (oops, wrong accent!   )
wayoutwalt
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16 posted 02-10-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very lovely was all i was going to say then i decided nonononon gotta say something witty

something witty


yuh yuh loved it sally nice poem!
 
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