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Valentine's Day (un)Sonnet

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jcthaman
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0 posted 02-07-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for jcthaman   Email jcthaman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jcthaman

hehe, everyone i have just found out that i seemed to skip over the 10 syllable rule in a shakespearean sonnet, so this is no longer a sonnet, it is simply a love poem (although i will try to fix it into a real one)  )

As I sit here on my bed,
this peaceful valentine's eve,
thoughts of you fill my head,
and it makes me believe
that you were meant for me
and we should be together.
I've never seen such beauty,
I want this to last forever.
I've never met someone so perfect,
and with you I feel so good.
How this ends I can't predict,
I'd give you the world if I could.
       I pray that this love is true,
       All I want is to be with you.


think she'll like it?


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devina
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since 10-28-1999
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1 posted 02-07-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was beautiful...just remember that what you're feeling now will deepen as you get older!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
WhtDove
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2 posted 02-07-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow! What wonderful thoughts! She'll love it I'm sure!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 02-08-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

She'd be a fool not to
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 02-08-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I think she will love it  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

JamesMichael
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5 posted 02-12-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A lovely peaceful valentines eve.   James
Tasi
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6 posted 02-12-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi

Simplistically lovely ...what every woman wants to hear   well said !!
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