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Valentine's Day (un)Sonnet
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Valentine's Day (un)Sonnet |
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jcthaman Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 22Hershey, PA, USA |
hehe, everyone i have just found out that i seemed to skip over the 10 syllable rule in a shakespearean sonnet, so this is no longer a sonnet, it is simply a love poem (although i will try to fix it into a real one)  )As I sit here on my bed, this peaceful valentine's eve, thoughts of you fill my head, and it makes me believe that you were meant for me and we should be together. I've never seen such beauty, I want this to last forever. I've never met someone so perfect, and with you I feel so good. How this ends I can't predict, I'd give you the world if I could. I pray that this love is true, All I want is to be with you. think she'll like it? [This message has been edited by jcthaman (edited 02-08-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was beautiful...just remember that what you're feeling now will deepen as you get older!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! What wonderful thoughts! She'll love it I'm sure! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
She'd be a fool not to  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I think she will love it Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely peaceful valentines eve. James |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
Simplistically lovely ...what every woman wants to hear well said !! |
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