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Angels in the Snow
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Angels in the Snow |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
As the sun slowly rose this morning I saw a blanket of untouched white And knew there was something I wanted to do Though I should probably wait until night. Still I put on my warmest jacket and gloves Found my big socks and one boot - While looking for the other I knew This was going to be be a hoot. What would the neighbors say when they saw This old kid, walking quite slow Getting ready to take a bitter cold dive To make angels in the snow. Never did hear what they thought of it But I'm sure it gave them a start I just hope they laughed for a bit For it sure did lighten my heart. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like fun! I too, still enjoy slides, swings, and blowing bubbles! Well done! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh, only if it snowed in my part of California...this only reminds me of its beauty!!! < !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSC- I like this. I'm still a kid at play ... flying kites, rollerskating, making mudpies in the rain, and puddle-jumping. When the kid in me comes out to play I care not what the neighbors say. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
With the loooooong winter upon us, this kid needs to go out and play sometimes.....thanks for your responses |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BSC, sounds like my grandpa! I wish he still had enough strength to get out and do that. This is a very fun and light hearted poem!  -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL this was great and uplifting! I did just that a few weeks ago! I bet my neighbors thought I was nuts, but hey, who cares! I had to throw adulthood out the window for a few moments, and I had fun doing it! Makes ya smile. And so does this poem!< !signature--> <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-08-2000).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Well, it was fun then, and with more snow in the forecast......we'll have to see, but maybe just one more time....Thanks SEA and WhtDove |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
One is never to old to walk in the snow....*grinning* or to make snow angels |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wonderful poem about a fun type of thing to do, I bet you warmed your neighbors hearts with those snow angels, I know it would have warmed mine seeing them. |
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