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To The One I Love

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WhtDove
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0 posted 02-07-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove



We've been through valleys low
We've stood on mountains high
Shared each others laughter
And the pain each other'd cry

We've fought many battles
We've over came them all
We've stood up together
And together we'd fall

We've traveled down life's road
With all its twists and turns
Not always listening
To each others concerns

You've reached out and touched me
And you've made me feel whole
With tenderness and caring
You've touched deep in my soul

What e're roads we travel
Or what twists life might take
I'm glad you're my partner
You're my hearts keepsake

God brought us together
As two partners for life
For us to grow stronger
As a man and his wife

I would've picked no other
To walk with by my side
You are my confidant
My light, my loving guide

I love you!


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Mistikman
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1 posted 02-07-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

So sweet and heartfelt, this is wonderful. Makes me wish I had someone to call my own  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
Balladeer
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2 posted 02-07-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, dovey! This is really nice and heartfelt. COngratulations on those feelings!  
tori
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3 posted 02-07-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Now Gir.. is this what came out of Ed saying I'm stuck with him...lol

No Dove, this was truly beautiful..
This one needs a frame... in case ya need to throw it at him some night!!..lol... I know I'm bad bad bad.. got a love me....

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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devina
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4 posted 02-07-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is very touching, I hope he appreciates your talent as we do!!!!! (and let him know you deserve a candle lit diner and roses for this one hun!)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 02-07-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove-
I can feel the adoring love in this.
What a wonderful poem ... especially
with Valentine's Day just around the corner.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 02-07-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

What a beautiful & touching valentine.  You write with the peace of someone who wants what he has...Lovely...
WhtDove
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Trevor thanks! I appreciate that! One day you will find someone you love also! Not to easy, lots of ups and downs! But rewarding nontheless!

Michael thanks! A long time coming that's for sure! It's wonderful I tell ya!

ROFL @ you Tori! Actually he asked for a frame so he can hang it in his office. But hey, I have plenty hanging around here! hehe     Just in case!  LOL  Love ya girl! Thanks!!!!!

Devina how sweet! Thanks, I'll let him know. haha

Marge thanks! Actually that's kind of why I wanted to write something for him. He has never had a poem from me, just to darn hard for me to come out with the words I want to say. I still didn't but this will have to do!
He said he likes it, and thanked me and all.  

Serenity, I do want what I have. I thank God for what I have! Thank you!  

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8 posted 02-07-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

shoot...you outta get a couple dozen roses for this....beau-ti-ful...
WhtDove
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9 posted 02-08-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Majestic what a lovely thought. I'm not aimin for roses though!    Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I appreciate that!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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10 posted 02-08-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

WhtDove, this does belong in a frame, or on a poster; a loving Valentine's Day card. This is excellent!   -SEA
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11 posted 02-08-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Incredibly beautiful sentiments Rebecca and I know you mean every word. So romantic!!! I love the last stanza!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


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12 posted 02-08-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel honey this is most beautiful and heartfelt, brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my thoat!! beautiful writing Angel girl. *hugs*  You Go Girl!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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13 posted 02-08-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I can imagine this as handwritten wedding vows on the back of shopping receipts. But then, I've always had an "interesting" imagination.   Thanks for sharing.

Mike
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14 posted 02-08-2000 02:43 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

I really loved that poem White Dove, thanks. One day i hope I'll have a wife who loves me so much she'd post poetry for me....  

Inspiration, dreams, love, your poem says it all. I wish your marriage all the best,
Alias.
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15 posted 02-08-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This kind of love grows stronger with age. You expressed it so beautifully.
Liz
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16 posted 02-08-2000 03:32 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I said it afore, 'n' I'll say it ag'in!
Awesome Becca! Beauty pouring from the heart this way is bound to renew his love in you!
HelmutB
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17 posted 02-08-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Of a love you speak so true and clear
such lovely poem you've written dear
I find your poem to such divine
I would like to use it for my Valentine
Very beautiful


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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This is so lovely WhtDove....a wonderful tribute of your love..
Toerag
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19 posted 02-08-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Dovie...this is so very sweet...you must really love your mate.....(So, why don't ya drop the chump and come with me?)....
WhtDove
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SEA, this will be put in a frame, he wants to take it to work and hang it in his office...aww! Thank you, you're so kind.

Thank you sweet Shawna! I do!

DA, awww. Didn't mean to make ya cry    Hugs to ya girl, luv ya!

LOL bsquirrel, that is interesting...

Alias thank you so much-I'm sure you'll find one you love, that will go to the ends of the earth for you!

Liz, so far it has-hope it keeps going, none do without the up's and down's.

Chris-thank you so much! hugs

HelmutB, thanks! How sweet, and you may use it if you'd really like to. I'd be honored!

Pepper, thank you so very much! Hugs

Toe, toe, toe! ROFL!!!  I'm honored Toe! But I'm kinda used to what I got now...Geez, I wouldn't wanna start all over ya know, took me 16 yrs...hehehe

Thank you all very much, such a wide range of replies and compliments!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
hoot_owl_rn
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21 posted 02-08-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh this is beautiful....I hope it's a valentines day surprise  
Echo Rhayne
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22 posted 02-08-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

'becca, phew, I finally made my way to it!  I told you it wasnt a syou were thinking it was, sheeeesh!  Its great!  Anyways, *hugs*   glad to hear things have gotten better, I guess cleaning my toilet with his toothbrush paid off LoL j/k  *hugs*

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Michael
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23 posted 02-08-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful poem, Rebecca.  It is quite a special feeling to "know" there is no other for you.  A very touching owrk.


michael
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24 posted 02-08-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Not only am I proud of your beautiful writing but your thoughtfulness, honesty and use of your talents.  Great heartfelt wording, so very well done.
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