I know the pain that you speek of in this poem all to well. And i liked how you gave the poem the twist of it coming from a very young man instead of an adult. To me it adds to the fact that the support from the mother is so important. I was wondering is this about you or did it just cross your mind. But great job.
This is really nice...wonderful poem to your Mom!! It is sooo sad though but I'm glad you have a friend in your Mom!! I often wish I wasn't an adult!!
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Take Care Bridgette
Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."