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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Freedom Comprehension is a toothed saw. That cuts through the ignorance door. But its only a simple tool. Bought and used by many a fool. It is a wondrous amalgam, That can show a way to Edam. But few people follow its worth, To the open path of rebirth. Books are but a knock on the door, It gives you a route and nothing more. It is an element of bare. It is an factor of care. It is a look, a touch, a view, It is most ancient, nothing new. It's a gathering of your plumb, It is the whisper of freedom. It's not the vital of what is known, But the acceptance of the unknown. |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
AMEN, Seymour. Bev |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I loved your poem...especially this part..."It's not the vital of what is known, But the acceptance of the unknown." The title grabbed me...that word has always had great meaning to me... Without freedom...there is no real living... thanks again for a wonderful read... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bbuzz, Thank you much for the Amen. Breathe, Thank you for a wonderful comment. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I agree, Amen Sy, you said this oh so well! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Echo, This feel like an echo, thank you again. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Books are but a knock on the door"... Good line, Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you for the read and comment. *L* |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
There are awlways unkown Must read the signs there shown You put a spot towards the goal Nice poem with so much soul The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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