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Cuddlez
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0 posted 02-07-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

If I die remember me with a smile
My laughs, my charms, my clutzy ways
The hysterical laughter I was prone to
My shyness, the hurt hid inside
My meanness to those who were different
Do not idealize me
I am no more or less than what I am
A human who loves to live
And sleep in
Take long drives and cuddle close
Handle animals, play with hair
Most of all, I am human
Prone to mistakes I wish I hadn't made
And apologies I've made
Friends I hold dear
Those who are better far away
The love of a new day
But the regret of yesterday
So if I die, do not idealize me
I am no more and no less than what I am
Right now



 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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1 posted 02-07-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Cuddlez, this is really good! -SEA
jascanvey
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2 posted 02-07-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

This is really good, so good in fact, that I had to read it over and over........
Cuddlez
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3 posted 02-07-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

You love me, you really love me )

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Rebecca
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4 posted 02-08-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Rebecca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rebecca

Wow !
WhtDove
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5 posted 02-08-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Cuddlez what can say to this? You brought out that...I'm just an ordinary person. Great job!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 02-08-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Great job!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 02-08-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You did a very good job with this....nice work  
Cuddlez
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8 posted 02-08-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Each of us has a charm
Each a place in life
But the accepting ot this
Doesn't mean the end of all strife.
Again, Thanks

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Cuddlez
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9 posted 02-11-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks SEA and Jascanvey....Me thinks I need to change the title though.

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
 
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