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Remember me, Remember when
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Remember me, Remember when |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
If I die remember me with a smile My laughs, my charms, my clutzy ways The hysterical laughter I was prone to My shyness, the hurt hid inside My meanness to those who were different Do not idealize me I am no more or less than what I am A human who loves to live And sleep in Take long drives and cuddle close Handle animals, play with hair Most of all, I am human Prone to mistakes I wish I hadn't made And apologies I've made Friends I hold dear Those who are better far away The love of a new day But the regret of yesterday So if I die, do not idealize me I am no more and no less than what I am Right now Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cuddlez, this is really good!  -SEA |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
This is really good, so good in fact, that I had to read it over and over........  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
You love me, you really love me  )Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Rebecca New Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 7Florida |
Wow ! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Cuddlez what can say to this? You brought out that...I'm just an ordinary person. Great job! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great job!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You did a very good job with this....nice work  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Each of us has a charm Each a place in life But the accepting ot this Doesn't mean the end of all strife. Again, Thanks Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thanks SEA and Jascanvey....Me thinks I need to change the title though. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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