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You win old friend

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Kevin
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0 posted 02-07-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

The last of embers lose their glow
and fall as blackened stone
Outside the night greets fallen snow
Inside I'm all alone
The wind, it scorns, the stubborn walls
that stand within its way
And grins as it so softly calls
my mind on out to play
The shadows dance along the room
basking in the moonlight
The emptiness starts to consume
the ever aging night
Left I to sit, thinking aloud
thoughts falling on deaf ears
working to build this silence shroud
trying to hold the tears
Again the wind begins to send
its invites in each clout
I sigh and say you win old friend
For I am coming out.


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 02-07-2000).]
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1 posted 02-07-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Kevin, how could you resist?! This is great!   -SEA
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I like this very much, Kevin... great job!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 02-07-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Kevin,
Good paint, good thoughts, good poem. Enjoyed the read.
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4 posted 02-07-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

I love the ever so subtle play on words here..

Enjoyed this immensely!   )


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Your level of understanding of the world far surpasses your age  
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 02-08-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Kevin, another wonderul poem you have here!  I always enjoy opening up one of your poems!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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7 posted 03-08-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for silvershaddow   Email silvershaddow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvershaddow

A great poem. I really enjoyed it.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 03-08-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This has such a wonderful warm flow.   I really like "Outside the night greets fallen snow...inside I'm alone."   Marvelous writing.   James
 
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