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Don't walk away

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vandana
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0 posted 02-07-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Don't walk away,
It's hurt me
when you leave me behind,
Do you see my tears falling,
Won't you wipe my fears away,
I'm scared to loose you,
I know,
I won't able to see you again,
So,kiss me goodbye,
Then I won't miss you that much,
I know, your love has meaning to it,
and I will keep our alive,
No matter you don't live with me,
But I will remember this moment
and never forget you ,
Even though,
you will walk away from me,But please at least last time,
Will you hold me?
when you told me you love me,
now you've hurt me
and break my heart,
Please,baby,
Don't walk away from me,
Don't walk away





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WhtDove
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1 posted 02-07-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Pleading poem!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Mike
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2 posted 02-07-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Well done Vandana... enjoyed your poem a lot.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 02-07-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

So heartbreaking! vandana, write us a poem where you two finally get together! I can't stand it anymore. This guy must be blind!
But this was beautiful, anyway
Love ya
Liz
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4 posted 02-07-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Vandana, you shouldn't beg for what your heart deserves, but hey, even I know that is much easier said than done! (I've begged a few times myself!) This is good! -SEA
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 02-07-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Right on!  Shout it from the roof tops girl!!!  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 02-08-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Such a sad poem  
Broken_Winged_Angel
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  Such a sad poem.  Did you two ever get together?     I hope so.  

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.
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