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Just My Size
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Just My Size |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Just My Size ~Marge Tindal~ In the hour before sunrise you came again to me In splendor you remain a vision etched in my memory With the flash of your smile the touch of your hand you take me across the bridges spread across the land. Our love not cloaked in darkness nor hidden in the night Love that shines with the rays of the sun brightened by the light Love, Love, Love I like the very sound of it But even more I like knowing IT IS A PERFECT FIT ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, I see your name and have to read! This is so great, as usual!  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A wonderful poem you see the light And may it shine forever bright. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling here....I'm sure that's one gift that won't be returned  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- Whoa ! That's a wonderful compliment. Hope you're never disappointed. Seymour- Awwww ! You're so sweet. Hoot- Thank you ... so glad to share a smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
SEA stole my line!  ) I'm the same way...I see your name...and I HAVE to stop in!and I am never disappointed..*smiling* Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! But of course!! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've said so much in so little Marge...simply beautiful!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh Marge, Marge, Marge, what a wonderful poem! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you give me FITS!!!...(and they're perfect, too ) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ LOL ! Well, just goes to show that I've got GREAT TASTE in friends. Great minds ... thinking alike. Thank you so much. Denise- You are always here for us all. And YOU are just a perfect fit ! Devina- Thanks young lady. Sometimes a 'few' words gets the job done. Echo- Hello gal. So VERY good to have you come and read. Thank you sooooooo much. Balladeer- Darling man, you always leave me with a smile ! You're just about perfect to me too. Well, maybe even 'perfect'.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I'm reading between the lines here. What a lovely love poem. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A Love Taylor ... now there's a challenging profession You have nice thoughts Marge Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed muchly. Wonderful effort. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie- Yes you are ! ! Now wipe that grin off your face !  Rex- Why thank you, sir. Thanks Mike- I'm glad you liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Very lovely....gave me warm fuzzies as I read it. *G* Great job--now I can see why everyone here loves you! Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
What a great poem. Love always seems to be, anyway. You think? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful is all I can say other than I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BobbyCat~ Oh, thank you so much. Cuddlez~ Yeah, I think. Thank you. LostDreamer~ I'd say you said it quite nicely. Thank you for digging into the recent past. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Love, Love, Love I love the last stanza it's a perfect fit You're wonderful Marge  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Your friendship is darned near a perfect fit too, young lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another wonderful loving poem Good work liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ You are the greatest ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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