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Marge Tindal
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Just My Size
~Marge Tindal~

In the hour before sunrise
you came again to me
In splendor you remain
a vision etched in my memory

With the flash of your smile
the touch of your hand
you take me across the bridges
spread across the land.

Our love
not cloaked in darkness
nor hidden in the night
Love that shines
with the rays of the sun
brightened by the light

Love, Love, Love
I like the very sound of it
But even more I like knowing  
IT IS A PERFECT FIT !



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA
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1 posted 02-07-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marge, I see your name and have to read! This is so great, as usual! -SEA
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Marge,
A wonderful poem you see the light
And may it shine forever bright.
*L* Sy
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Smiling here....I'm sure that's one gift that won't be returned  
Marge Tindal
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SEA-
Whoa !  That's a wonderful compliment.
Hope you're never disappointed.

Seymour-
Awwww !  You're so sweet.

Hoot-
Thank you ...
so glad to share a smile.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA stole my line!   )  I'm the same way...I see your name...and I HAVE to stop in!

and I am never disappointed..*smiling*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
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Very lovely, Marge! But of course!!  

Denise
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You've said so much in so little Marge...simply beautiful!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Oh Marge, Marge, Marge, what a wonderful poem!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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Marge, you give me FITS!!!...(and they're perfect, too  )
Marge Tindal
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Breathe~
LOL !  Well, just goes to show
that I've got GREAT TASTE in friends.
Great minds ... thinking alike.
Thank you so much.

Denise-
You are always here for us all.
And YOU are just a perfect fit !

Devina-
Thanks young lady.  
Sometimes a 'few' words gets the job done.

Echo-
Hello gal.  So VERY good to have you
come and read.  Thank you sooooooo much.

Balladeer-
Darling man, you always leave me with a smile !  You're just about perfect to me too.
Well, maybe even 'perfect'.  
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Marge--I'm reading between the lines here.   What a lovely love poem.
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A Love Taylor ... now there's a challenging profession

You have nice thoughts Marge

Rex}<{{{{o>
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Enjoyed muchly.  Wonderful effort.
Marge Tindal
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Martie-
Yes you are ! !
Now wipe that grin off your face !  

Rex-
Why thank you, sir.

Thanks Mike-
I'm glad you liked it.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Very lovely....gave me warm fuzzies as I read it.  *G*   Great job--now I can see why everyone here loves you!  

Bobbycat =^..^=
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What a great poem. Love always seems to be, anyway. You think?

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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Marge, Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful is all I can say other than I love it.
Marge Tindal
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BobbyCat~
Oh, thank you so much.

Cuddlez~
Yeah, I think.  Thank you.

LostDreamer~
I'd say you said it quite nicely.
Thank you for digging into the recent past.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Love, Love, Love
I love the last stanza
it's a perfect fit
You're wonderful Marge    
Marge Tindal
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Tracie~
Your friendship is darned near
a perfect fit too, young lady.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Another wonderful loving poem
Good work
liz
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Elizabeth, my friend~
You are the greatest !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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