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Parker
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0 posted 2000-02-07 02:25 AM


When Your Away
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When your away
My day is empty
Its hard to face
the endless minutes

When your away
my heart is empty
I can not bear
the lasting hours

When your away
I am alone
I can not take
this empty feeling

When yor away.....
don't ever be away
from Me.

James Parker Haley


© Copyright 2000 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 2000-02-07 02:37 AM


You sure do know how to make a girl sigh, dear James... XO

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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2 posted 2000-02-07 09:17 AM



Parker,

Your words, though few,

share volumes into you.

Claire

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3 posted 2000-02-07 09:37 AM


SEA sighs for James' words as well.~sigh~  Very romantic James! -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-02-07 09:56 AM


Haleyja,
Well short and sweet and says volumes.

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-02-07 10:28 AM


This poem cries of love and longing  
Parker
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6 posted 2000-02-07 10:41 AM


Thank you all, I hate being away from the one I love, whoever she may be.

Parker

WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-02-07 11:11 AM


Sure does cry out for the one you you love.
LOL @ your comment, do you not who it is you love? Whoever she is?  LOL

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Parker
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8 posted 2000-02-07 11:52 AM


Right now there is no one, WhtDove.... but I'm putting out applications.
Only requirement is Long Wet kissing.

parker

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-02-07 11:57 AM


Makes me want to be there for you. So sad.
But lovely
Liz

Parker
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10 posted 2000-02-07 03:44 PM


Liz, Thank you, there really is a saddness to this one, though it does not seem to come across that way.

Parker

jascanvey
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11 posted 2000-02-07 06:47 PM


Okay, you wrote this for me right? *sigh* I wish. (I can do that long wet kissing stuff!)

Parker
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12 posted 2000-02-07 08:10 PM


Julie, I look forward to it.

Parker


Echo Rhayne
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13 posted 2000-02-08 11:11 AM


awwwwwwwww James, how sweet this is.  I hope you find someone deserving of you soon!  *hugs*

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


Breathe~
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14 posted 2000-02-08 11:24 AM


Long wet kissing?  Where have you BEEN all of my life???  *grin*

This is very touching... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

Parker
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15 posted 2000-02-08 02:11 PM


Thanks you Echo, I'm sure I will.

Breathe, yes and some gentle neck biting.  

Parker

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