scorched dragon: i'm sorry to hear about your loss... i hope i didn't cause too many unhappy memories...
hoot_owl: i know they dont, but often times they do... i just wanted to write a poem that pointed out the fact that even though they may "finish last" they never finish "least"... in other words, nice guys generally end up with girls better suited for them
sea: i apologize for making you feel left out ^_^*... my idea came from mistikman's poem that dealt with nice GUYS and his poem came from the philosophy 101 topic about the same subject from the male perspective... i do realize that many girls often suffer the same fate... my poem is more about the idea of how both "nice guys" and "nice girls" need to stop drooling over the jocks and beauty queens and find someone worthy of their sincere hearts... in my poem, the guy learns this, the girl doesn't... and the girl ends up losing the "nice guy" she claimed to want so badly to another girl who understood what she needed and wanted in a guy... mabye that's no excuse, but i hope it's a least a little in my defense...
preach: well, actually this poem is about a common teenage sentiment... one that i, thankfully, never had to experience... i always swooned over the nice, shy girls... but myself being too shy to talk to them *heh*... it never worked out very well...
bobbycat: thank you
cuddlez: thank you for your kind response, and i'm glad you've found someone worthy of yourself
jerome the boy with no brain
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!