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In These Words

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tori
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0 posted 02-06-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

My eyes reach out to you- in these words
The mirror to my soul projects to you
Till my heart finds you inside- these words

My mind is intoxicated by you- in these words
As you are there in my minds eye
Living, breathing -in these words

A thousand tears  live inside -these words
They cry as the restless heart aches
My heart bleeds fast -in these words

Now how can the heavens open with out you
And the rivers, how can they flow to the sea
While mountains still reach for heavens high
Why do they not crumble in rage- in these words
I don't know how to go there- in these words

How do these words come so clear
when they are just -words
And the heart is alive inside me
Beating in melody a rhapsody
Of love for you -from these words

How can I love you so truly -in these words
How is it you make me whole -in these words
When you are just -these words
To let  these words flow away
like melting snow on the eve of a spring day
Would be my death -in words

tori 2000




 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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January Flowers
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1 posted 02-06-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Very Meaningful, these words.
GREAT JOB in my words.
SEA
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2 posted 02-06-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tori, "In these words" I felt powerful emotion. Beautiful poem!   -SEA
Breathe~
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3 posted 02-06-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Simply breathtaking....

and beautifully put together... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
tori
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4 posted 02-06-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank you Flowers and Sea...  

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 02-06-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"How can the heavens open without you" Beautiful poetic prase, and lovely poem all together
Liz
tori
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6 posted 02-06-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

thanks so much Breathe~

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
WhtDove
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7 posted 02-06-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tori, I don't know what to say to this! Just a big WOW is all that comes to mind right now. You've left me speechless girl!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
tori
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8 posted 02-06-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

thanks Liz....
Awe thanks Dove.. :0

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
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9 posted 02-06-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Truly beautiful, Tori! Words do contain so much, don't they?!  

Denise
tori
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10 posted 02-07-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

They sure do Denise... thanks for yours!

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
HelmutB
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11 posted 02-07-2000 07:04 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

This is more than words can ever say
This is more that a lightning ray
Tori I take my hat I take me cain
And walk right over to you again
What a piece what a gem
smooochies back to you gain
Love-
Helmut

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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12 posted 02-07-2000 07:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tori-
Such lovely thoughts you've penned.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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Your words speak volumes  
tori
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14 posted 02-07-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

thanks Buddy...
You too Marge and Hoot... thanks for reading

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
Echo Rhayne
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15 posted 02-07-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

oh so very well said

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

JennyLee
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16 posted 02-13-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautifully written Tori.
I loved it  

Jennifer L.
tori
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17 posted 02-14-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks so much Echo and Jenny  

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
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