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In These Words
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
My eyes reach out to you- in these words The mirror to my soul projects to you Till my heart finds you inside- these words My mind is intoxicated by you- in these words As you are there in my minds eye Living, breathing -in these words A thousand tears live inside -these words They cry as the restless heart aches My heart bleeds fast -in these words Now how can the heavens open with out you And the rivers, how can they flow to the sea While mountains still reach for heavens high Why do they not crumble in rage- in these words I don't know how to go there- in these words How do these words come so clear when they are just -words And the heart is alive inside me Beating in melody a rhapsody Of love for you -from these words How can I love you so truly -in these words How is it you make me whole -in these words When you are just -these words To let these words flow away like melting snow on the eve of a spring day Would be my death -in words © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Very Meaningful, these words. GREAT JOB in my words. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori, "In these words" I felt powerful emotion. Beautiful poem!  -SEA |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Simply breathtaking.... and beautifully put together...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Flowers and Sea... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"How can the heavens open without you" Beautiful poetic prase, and lovely poem all together Liz |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thanks so much Breathe~ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, I don't know what to say to this! Just a big WOW is all that comes to mind right now. You've left me speechless girl! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thanks Liz.... Awe thanks Dove.. :0 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Truly beautiful, Tori! Words do contain so much, don't they?!  Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
They sure do Denise... thanks for yours! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This is more than words can ever say This is more that a lightning ray Tori I take my hat I take me cain And walk right over to you again What a piece what a gem smooochies back to you gain Love- Helmut The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori- Such lovely thoughts you've penned. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your words speak volumes |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thanks Buddy... You too Marge and Hoot... thanks for reading If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
oh so very well said Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautifully written Tori. I loved it Jennifer L. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks so much Echo and Jenny If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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