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The desire that consumes her...
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The desire that consumes her... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
She is missing him... More often he finds his way into her thoughts Gazing at his picture her eyes relish in their venture trailing across the two dimentional image... She plucks the photo from the shelf the glossy surface winking softly in the light as she holds the frame close memorizing what is known and held in herheart.. Thick wavy locks... groomed and perfected moonlight eyes darkened with endless allure their color envied by the night lips curved into a devastating smile her heart trips for endless moments as she imagines those lips lingering above hers his breath teasing warmth upon her lips she can almost taste him and yearns to be kissed by the desire that consumes her... She clutches the frame to her breast holding him close her heart beating wildly against his glass covered cheek His image burns upon her skin as he gazes out from the glass enclosure smiling eyes sparkle with devilish intent whispering of thoughts unknown a mystery captured and imprisoned forever upon a single slip of paper... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ I think your heart just spoke, because I heard it whisper. Sensually romantic. This is really good.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Breathe, This was beautiful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sweet and lovely visuals...and how well I can relate! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thank you all... this is such an encouraging place...and I'm so happy that people stop and take the time to read...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A very beautiful and passionate piece! Very lovely! Denise |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is very very good! I could only dream of having your talent!!!! Alina Le Ann |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Well, it seems they've summed it up. Beautiful! |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
very visual and descriptive...your desire and passion come through in this poem...I liked it a lot (maybe b/c I can relate to it!)  Bobbycat |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Denise...As always...thank you...*beam* Alina...lovely name... ) Thank you! I would love to see some of your work...Sally...Thank you..Thank you... )bobbycat...I was feeling rather passionate when I wrote it... ) Hope your experience was also a pleasant one?Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was simply beautiful...I felt like I was there...and at more than one point in time I'm sure I was!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
breathe: this is beautiful and yet somewhat melancholy... it reminds me of a song that i really like by The Cure called "Pictures of You"... i guess this idea hits me so hard because i am so far away from my lover... sometimes all i have are pictures... i think you do a magnificent job here of first arousing the sensual and then giving rise to the sorrowful (though perhaps sorrowful only for those who, like me, have some experience with this)... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem, I dont think there is anything I can really do but echo everyone else here Keep up the good work.I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
Great Poem Breathe... I think your imagery is brilliant, this is easily the best illustration i've read for a long time. Photos An image is eternal and yet it isn't real- The colour hides beneath a pane, a dream, in timeless space. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Good thing I looked up and saw your name while reading this one...because I almost forgot to breathe.....breath taking |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I'm overwhelmed! Thank you all...Again! For your wonderful comments... )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh so beautiful!!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
What a beautiful handle you have... and thank you...*smiling* Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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