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The desire that consumes her...

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Breathe~
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0 posted 02-06-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Breathe~

She is missing him...
More often he finds his way
into her thoughts

Gazing at his picture
her eyes relish in their venture
trailing across the two dimentional image...

She plucks the photo from the shelf
the glossy surface winking softly
in the light
as she holds the frame close
memorizing what is known
and held in herheart..

Thick wavy locks...
groomed and perfected moonlight
eyes darkened with endless allure
their color envied by the night
lips curved into a devastating smile
her heart trips
for endless moments
as she imagines those lips
lingering above hers
his breath teasing
warmth upon her lips
she can almost taste him
and yearns to be kissed
by the desire that consumes her...

She clutches the frame to her breast
holding him close
her heart beating wildly
against his glass covered cheek
His image burns upon her skin
as he gazes out from the glass enclosure
smiling eyes
sparkle with devilish intent
whispering of thoughts unknown
a mystery captured
and imprisoned forever
upon a single slip of paper...

© Copyright 2000 Denise Blackwell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-06-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Breathe~
I think your heart just spoke,
because I heard it whisper.

Sensually romantic.
This is really good.
~*Marge*~



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2 posted 02-06-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Breathe,
This was beautiful!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-06-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sweet and lovely visuals...and how well I can relate!
Breathe~
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4 posted 02-06-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Thank you all...

this is such an encouraging place...and I'm so happy that people stop and take the time to read... )


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Denise
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5 posted 02-06-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A very beautiful and passionate piece! Very lovely!  

Denise
Alina Le Ann
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6 posted 02-07-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is very very good!

I could only dream of having your talent!!!!


Alina Le Ann
Sally S.
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7 posted 02-07-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Well, it seems they've summed it up.  Beautiful!
bobbycat
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8 posted 02-07-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

very visual and descriptive...your desire and passion come through in this poem...I liked it a lot (maybe b/c I can relate to it!)  

Bobbycat
Breathe~
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9 posted 02-07-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Denise...As always...thank you...*beam*

Alina...lovely name... )  Thank you!  I would love to see some of your work...

Sally...Thank you..Thank you... )

bobbycat...I was feeling rather passionate when I wrote it... )  Hope your experience was also a pleasant one?


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
devina
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10 posted 02-07-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was simply beautiful...I felt like I was there...and at more than one point in time I'm sure I was!!!

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breathe: this is beautiful and yet somewhat melancholy... it reminds me of a song that i really like by The Cure called "Pictures of You"... i guess this idea hits me so hard because i am so far away from my lover... sometimes all i have are pictures... i think you do a magnificent job here of first arousing the sensual and then giving rise to the sorrowful (though perhaps sorrowful only for those who, like me, have some experience with this)...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

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As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge


Mistikman
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12 posted 02-07-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Great poem, I dont think there is anything I can really do but echo everyone else here   Keep up the good work.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
Alias
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13 posted 02-07-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Great Poem Breathe...
I think your imagery is brilliant, this is easily the best illustration i've read for a long time.
                Photos
An image is eternal
and yet it isn't real-
The colour hides beneath a pane,
a dream, in timeless space.


hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 02-07-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Good thing I looked up and saw your name while reading this one...because I almost forgot to breathe.....breath taking  
Breathe~
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15 posted 02-07-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

I'm overwhelmed!

Thank you all...Again!  For your wonderful comments... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
Echo Rhayne
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16 posted 02-07-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Oh so beautiful!!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Breathe~
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17 posted 02-07-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

What a beautiful handle you have...

and thank you...*smiling*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
 
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