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Enchanted Moment
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Enchanted Moment |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Enchanted Moment Sitting there, against the sundown Waves wearing a foaming crown Sounds tranquil sousing the why Flowing the ocean lie I set my mind to quiet my soul Remembering your tiny mole Remembering us How often did I kiss this nevus The ocean is silent as you now Emotions grow high for thou Tears I did never shed Inside my soul so wet Could I only hold you once more Could I only once more adore I see you smile molted in the wave Oh my love how much did I gave Inside my heart will never be still While outside it is so tranquil Outside the waves roll so calm Inside I miss your holding arm I sing a song so full of love I do miss you so much my dove I do not know where did it went The enchanted moment The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut- This is sadly enchanting. You have loved and it speaks your heart. 'Tears I did never shed Inside my soul so wet' *Hugs* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sad and very beautiful.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting poem, Helmut! Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Hey buddy I just got this in my E-Mail have not had time to reply.. but now its here and tis perfectly Enchanting as it is great job... love ya... smoochies and big hug! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed this. Though sad,it was strangely peaceful also. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The sea can bring a sort of peace to so much rolling emotion. Very heart spoken words. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is sooo sweet Helmut....she must be quite some lady!!!! You keep your heart in the right place love!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Helmut, this is sad and sweet all at once. I liked it very much! -SEA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sadly beautiful Helmut  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sad but lovely... well done! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Thank you to all "God it feels good to be home" doesn't it. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The ebb and flow of love.... You sing a sad lovesong, mein freund.....  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
hey 'nut ooops I mean 'mut hehe J/K I liked this a lot Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sadness and longing always seems to go well with the sea..nice painting, Helmut. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Helmut this was great! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Wow... this was eery, sad, solemn- all rolled into one. You have quite a talent! Z |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Nan Thank you dearly, I'm glad I touched your heart, Dein Freund I'm galdly be Echo Rhayne Hello Echo lol, had trouble with my nutty name Thanks for your reply (perhaps I could give you some german lesson lol)Balladeer Micheal I thank you so much, I happy that the brushes of my heart painted well WhtDove Thank you dear for reading my work Zelda Also thanks to you, I like the roll into one I'm glad you stopped by Thank you all my friends The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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