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Enchanted Moment

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HelmutB
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Enchanted Moment

Sitting there, against the sundown
Waves wearing a foaming crown
Sounds tranquil sousing the why
Flowing the ocean lie
I set my mind to quiet my soul
Remembering your tiny mole
Remembering us
How often did I kiss this nevus
The ocean is silent as you now
Emotions grow high for thou
Tears I did never shed
Inside my soul so wet
Could I only hold you once more
Could I only once more adore
I see you smile molted in the wave
Oh my love how much did I gave
Inside my heart will never be still
While outside it is so tranquil
Outside the waves roll so calm
Inside I miss your holding arm
I sing a song so full of love
I do miss you so much my dove
I do not know where did it went
The enchanted moment


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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1 posted 02-06-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Helmut-
This is sadly enchanting.
You have loved and it speaks
your heart.

'Tears I did never shed
Inside my soul so wet'

*Hugs* to you.
~*Marge*~



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2 posted 02-06-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sad and very beautiful.  
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Enchanting poem, Helmut!

Denise
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Hey buddy I just got this in my E-Mail have not had time to reply.. but now its here and tis perfectly Enchanting as it is great job... love ya... smoochies and big hug!

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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5 posted 02-06-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I enjoyed this. Though sad,it was strangely peaceful also.
Martie
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The sea can bring a sort of peace to so much rolling emotion.  Very heart spoken words.
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7 posted 02-07-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is sooo sweet Helmut....she must be quite some lady!!!! You keep your heart in the right place love!!!!!

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Helmut, this is sad and sweet all at once. I liked it very much! -SEA
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So sadly beautiful Helmut  
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Sad but lovely... well done!
HelmutB
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Thank you to all "God it feels good to be home" doesn't it.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Nan
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The ebb and flow of love.... You sing a sad lovesong, mein freund.....
Echo Rhayne
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hey 'nut  ooops I mean 'mut hehe J/K I liked this a lot

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Sadness and longing always seems to go well with the sea..nice painting, Helmut.
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Helmut this was great!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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16 posted 02-08-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Wow... this was eery, sad, solemn- all rolled into one.  You have quite a talent!

Z
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Nan
Thank you dearly, I'm glad I touched your heart, Dein Freund I'm galdly be

Echo Rhayne
Hello Echo lol, had trouble with my nutty name   Thanks for your reply (perhaps I could give you some german lesson lol)

Balladeer
Micheal I thank you so much, I happy that the brushes of my heart painted well

WhtDove
Thank you dear for reading my work

Zelda
Also thanks to you, I like the roll into one
I'm glad you stopped by

Thank you all my friends

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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