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Bbuzz
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0 posted 2000-02-06 06:57 PM


Beaches cooled by ocean breeze
Making sway the tall palm trees.

Tides display the oceans treasures
Each new "find" excites and pleasures.

Swim clad people lay about
Watching for a whale to spout.

Basking in the rays of sun
Staying 'til the day is done.

Returning to a cosy home
Tired & hungry, but thinking poem.

Deep contentment, smiling face.
Oh God, how I love this place!


Sorry so many "Hawaii" poems! Just have to "let them out"! LOL, Bev


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-06 07:15 PM


Bbuzz, Hawaii is beautiful and very inspiring. Let 'em flow!   -SEA
Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-06 11:24 PM


Beautiful poem, Bev! It must be a beautiful place to have inspired this!

Denise

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
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3 posted 2000-02-07 01:04 AM


Wow Mom...makes me feel like I'm there!
Wish I were there  
Glad to see you had fun!!!
Love ~S

Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 2000-02-07 02:23 PM


Bev, this was great, wish I was there too!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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