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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Happiness You came into my life When I needed you most Shared my fears, and sorrows Never questioned my judgement Never second guessed me You opened my eyes To a world so bright To happiness,and hope Showed me love and loyalty You made me smile You made me cry You were patient You were kind Thaught me not to fear But to embrace love For not all love is pain But Happiness  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Catwomen, very nice, very sweet! Great poem! -SEA |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A poem so sweet of love foretold as earth itself love is so old New at every day the sun will shine Your poem such devine, devine The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Thank you all for your kind words. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
You give me hope...  ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
He taught you to embrace love and to embrace loves happiness. I have been thinking about this happiness. Me and a friend went out tonight to a movie and dinner and we were talking and she started laughing about something and it does rub off...and I told her how I remember how we were both laughing out heads off at a situation that happened when we were together about a week ago and I can still remember how wonderful it was for us to share these moments of happiness. I have been hoping this would be my year for happiness. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice words |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
There's nothing quite sharing something with someone so close. Someone to lean on, someone to make your world a little brighter. Very good! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
=^..^= Sounds like you found someone special to me! My only comment other than that is that there is a mispelled word in the last stanza I believe thaught was meant to be taught.....other than that I think it is great! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Catwoman, what a special poem this is...Well written. Tracie |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Your kind words are so sweet. But true happiness comes from wanting what you have instead of having what you want |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Happiness is reading this poem!  |
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