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The aura of love

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Seymour Tabin
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       The aura of love

Love, a pollen spore blown and sown,
Transcending into overtone,
Brakes the bounds of earthly bed
And flowers in your heart and head.

You are enceinte with its birth
Surrounded by a field of girth.
Full bloom and radiant fair.
Enthralled with its being there.

It arrests you in every way,
Like the queen of a soiree.
On the constant edge of exalt,
It leads you into full default.

A bouquet of constant unfold.
A habitual rainbows hold.
A chameleon of colored hues.
A garden of greens and blues.

And its bloom peaks beauty each day,
In a dance of tender display.
Quixotic as an angels touch,
Euphoric, with tones as such.

A type of metagenesis,
It is a metamorphosis.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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A very beautiful poem.

 
HelmutB
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Such beauty lies within each line
Well written and if I' so incline
May say
Hope you will see a flower every day
Nature at its best described in your words

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Seymour, Now I can't wait for Spring! This was so great! -SEA
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Ahhhhhh! Makes me feel love. Nicely put Seymour Tabin! I am lucky enough to feel that every day!  Thank you.
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Seymour-
This is a beautiful piece of writing.
Am I surprised?  
No, just very pleased.

Love in bloom
makes room
for fields of blossoms
in the heart.

Your heart is ablaze with
the color and fragrance of the bloom.
~*Marge*~


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Nan
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Love is "a bouquet of constant unfold"
Nice metaphor, Sy.... I like it..  
Munda
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Beautiful poem Sy.  
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
You've captured the aura
You've written my heart
You've amazed other poets
You're light years apart
Your verses enchant me
Your words seem to flow
You've captured a feeling
That many don't know
So here's to your poetry
Here's to your soul
Here's to the magic
Of loves sweetest goal
Beautiful, Sy
Liz
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Cat, Thank you for the beautiful.

Helmut, You are my favorite fan, thank you.

Sea, Beautiful comment, thank you.

Bbuzz, You are a licky pderson.

Marge, you are sweeter than light to me. *L*

Nan, I love you too. *L*

Munda, Thank you.

Elizabeth, You comment was a bouquet of love.
Love Sy

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Beautiful poem Seymore  
Corinne
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what a lovely poem, and I love this style of writing, too!


Corinne
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What a lovely garden you've painted... )

 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
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Your poem has captured the aura of love perfectly!  

Denise
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Beautiful words, Sy.  You made me sigh.  (giggle...pun intended)  You paint a lovely picture here....brings on a yearning for springtime romance.     Lovely.
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Your poems always have such deep meanings and feeling,... this is no exception.  Very lovely, SY

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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Hoot, Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L*
Corinne, Thank you corinne.

Breathe, Beautiful commenmt, thank you.

Sally, Nice thoughts, Sally.

First, Very nice comment, thank you.
devina
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There's no way to describe the way you're poetry affects me Sy...it's utter beauty m'friend!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Seymour Tabin
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Devina,
That is a very sweet comment, thank you so much.
LngJhnAg
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19 posted 02-07-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Sy

You have changed so much since I've been reading your poetry.  This is a classic poem, Sy.  It is easy to tell that you spent a good deal of time working on it.  Great job.
Echo Rhayne
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Beautiful Sy

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Andrew Scott
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Yo Sir Tabin... Kind of like having the chicken pox... only nicer with an itch you can scratch... though at times they both leave scars.  Really, this was very beautiful and I appreciate all the work that went into this piece.  As always, I bow to you and yours with thanks for sharing.
Seymour Tabin
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LngJngAg,
A wonderful comment and I thank you much. Your comments I think about. Sy

Echo,
Always enjoy your comments, thanks.

Andrew,
Enjoyed your comments and your work.
Meadowmuse
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The simplicity of meter in this piece is very effectively employed to parallel the simplicity and acceptance of love itself. Nicely written, Sy.

Claire
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Seymour, This is writing at it's best.  
 
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