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The aura of love
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The aura of love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The aura of love Love, a pollen spore blown and sown, Transcending into overtone, Brakes the bounds of earthly bed And flowers in your heart and head. You are enceinte with its birth Surrounded by a field of girth. Full bloom and radiant fair. Enthralled with its being there. It arrests you in every way, Like the queen of a soiree. On the constant edge of exalt, It leads you into full default. A bouquet of constant unfold. A habitual rainbows hold. A chameleon of colored hues. A garden of greens and blues. And its bloom peaks beauty each day, In a dance of tender display. Quixotic as an angels touch, Euphoric, with tones as such. A type of metagenesis, It is a metamorphosis. |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
A very beautiful poem. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such beauty lies within each line Well written and if I' so incline May say Hope you will see a flower every day Nature at its best described in your words The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, Now I can't wait for Spring! This was so great!  -SEA |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Ahhhhhh! Makes me feel love. Nicely put Seymour Tabin! I am lucky enough to feel that every day! Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- This is a beautiful piece of writing. Am I surprised? No, just very pleased. Love in bloom makes room for fields of blossoms in the heart. Your heart is ablaze with the color and fragrance of the bloom. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love is "a bouquet of constant unfold" Nice metaphor, Sy.... I like it.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Sy. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You've captured the aura You've written my heart You've amazed other poets You're light years apart Your verses enchant me Your words seem to flow You've captured a feeling That many don't know So here's to your poetry Here's to your soul Here's to the magic Of loves sweetest goal Beautiful, Sy Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Thank you for the beautiful. Helmut, You are my favorite fan, thank you. Sea, Beautiful comment, thank you. Bbuzz, You are a licky pderson. Marge, you are sweeter than light to me. *L* Nan, I love you too. *L* Munda, Thank you. Elizabeth, You comment was a bouquet of love. Love Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful poem Seymore |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
what a lovely poem, and I love this style of writing, too! Corinne |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
What a lovely garden you've painted...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your poem has captured the aura of love perfectly! Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Beautiful words, Sy. You made me sigh. (giggle...pun intended) You paint a lovely picture here....brings on a yearning for springtime romance. Lovely. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Your poems always have such deep meanings and feeling,... this is no exception. Very lovely, SY I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L* Corinne, Thank you corinne. Breathe, Beautiful commenmt, thank you. Sally, Nice thoughts, Sally. First, Very nice comment, thank you. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
There's no way to describe the way you're poetry affects me Sy...it's utter beauty m'friend!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, That is a very sweet comment, thank you so much. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy You have changed so much since I've been reading your poetry. This is a classic poem, Sy. It is easy to tell that you spent a good deal of time working on it. Great job. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful Sy Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yo Sir Tabin... Kind of like having the chicken pox... only nicer with an itch you can scratch... though at times they both leave scars. Really, this was very beautiful and I appreciate all the work that went into this piece. As always, I bow to you and yours with thanks for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJngAg, A wonderful comment and I thank you much. Your comments I think about. Sy Echo, Always enjoy your comments, thanks. Andrew, Enjoyed your comments and your work. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The simplicity of meter in this piece is very effectively employed to parallel the simplicity and acceptance of love itself. Nicely written, Sy. Claire |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Seymour, This is writing at it's best. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow and Lost dreamer, Where did you find this one, I had forgotten all about it, I thought it was in the elephants grave yard. Thank you so much for the lovely comments. *L* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks for bringing this back, Lost Dreamer as I missed it before. Sy, you speak of love with such depth of understanding and you express it so beautifully. |
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