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In Like a Lion and Out Like a Lamb
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In Like a Lion and Out Like a Lamb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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In Like a Lion and Out Like a Lamb You came in like a lion So pompous and loud Talking and working The obvious crowd Pleasing and teasing And using your charm Embracing and gracing Each one in your arms And I waited my turn Just like every one else And couldn't take my eyes off Your wonderful self I had long been in love with you Equal to none And was saddened to think I was not number one You spent the whole evening Enchanting the room With your laughter that everyone Tried to consume The women all catered To your every whim A man of your talents That made them all grin So charming, so witty So handsome, so sweet A devil, an angel Delightful to meet By the end of the evening You finally came And gave me a kiss As you whispered my name Then you closed your blue eyes And your one-year-old charms And left like a lamb In your Daddy's warm arms Grandma [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Grandma ..... this is just the most precious thing. Awwwwww ! Makes my little heart feel like I just got a hug ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
AWE..this is sooo sweet Liz...at the beginning I thought you were writing about man...he he...till the end of course!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Well, you took me in too, and I'm delighted by it. I KNOW that seductive individual. This is absolutely ravingly wonderful -- what's more, I've not the slightest doubt it's publishable. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Amen to what Ted said, Liz, though I'm not a grandma, I know what you mean about a baby's ability to charm and disarm! Wonderful poem, Liz, just wonderful! Claire |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
This is fabulous. I thought it was about a man too, thinking to myself "yeah I know his sort"!!! Excellent, apparantly I like suprise endings,  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Liz, You succeeded in getting your message across very well. Apparently, we all got fooled. I like twist endings. ~Gene |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
They do captivate the heart, don't they, Elizabeth?! This is so precious!! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Wonderful enjoyed your wit and charm. Love Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
GOTCHA! I enjoyed all of your responses. You are very kind. But he is a real charmer, little Kyle. Thank you so very much Liz |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Liz, What a beauty. I like how you controlled what we all thought until the last! LOL. We have a 3 year old grandson and I was there with you! WOW! I wish I had written this one!!!!!!!!! (I printed this one!!!!!) Bev |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Liz!!!! *G* |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
First I thought it was me But whom am I kidding here I could never compete with him Although the blue eyes would fit Such a beautiful tribiute to your grandson Exellent and fun to read. So he is like a Ricky Marten, or Mel Gibson, or Burce Willis. Ok guys get in line The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Liz, yet another to melt my heart! One of my nephews' is 11 months old. Oh, is he a charmer. Baby Love! This made me think of him.-SEA |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I was SURE this was about Toe's love life but I see it is about another infant instead. hehe. It's a wonderfully warm poem |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is awesome - and the most fun time, I think, is that year between one and two years old - They're just soooooo funny... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL You sure had me fooled too. Wonderful poem Elizabeth  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz, this is not what I expected at all when I started reading this. This was so unexpected, and sooooooo sweet! I just love this! How warm and tender!<*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Another fooled ...Liz, this is delightful!! A smiling nana here.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What beautiful responses you all have given to this poem. Thank you all very much Helmut, thanks for being here. It could have been about you, if we'd drop the last verse! Thanks for the poem. And Pepper, it's so nice to see you. I hope you get better soon. You've been ill too long. Thanks again Liz |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Awe Liz... this was great loved the twist... kinda thought there might be a cat fight in here somewhere.lol truely enjoyed... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Ahhhh another best favorite of mine found in this with the simple click of the mouse and the talent of you Liz.....Wonderful....This is really great I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS!!!!!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tori, First Knight and Hoot Thank you all for yourn wonderful comments Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Liz, this is so heartwarming and beautiful! I love it! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Elizabeth, This was sweet, I loved the way you constructed it. |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
LOL!!! Here I was with a picture of you in a Grand Ball Room and Prince Charming coming to sweep you off your feet and.....WOW!! What a suprising turn this one took. This is a true work of art. Thank you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gosh, Liz...I know I read this and loved it but it doesn't look like I replied...am now..Just wonderful! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
thank you all for reading and commenting and Ruffrider, this fooled almost everyone Liz |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Would like to add my compliments for a very well written poem. Fooled me to in such a sweet way. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Liz: And I was all set to call him a rat...ROFL but instead he's a little blue eyed darling... HUSG Live in my heart and pay no rent... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Danny Cindy, you make me laugh. I'm sure you would have told him off, too. Thanks, dear Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Liz, very sneaky, and very very sweet twist, I thought you were gonna shoot this casanova down, but you fell for his charms too. Women are so easy when your one years old. Where did I go wrong when I turned two. Parker |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Liz, this is precious!!! What a bundle of joy Kyle sounds!! Have to admit, another fool here!! I was completely taken in!! This is an excellent poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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