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Hawaiin Paradise

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Bbuzz
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0 posted 02-06-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for Bbuzz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bbuzz

We sit out on the balcony,
The sun comes up so warm.
The birds sing us a melody,
New thoughts begin to form.

Of beaches, white with sparkling sand,
Of fragrances so sweet.
Of palm trees swaying from the land
And coming hours of heat.

Of lazing in the warm, moist air
Savoring the slendor.
Drinking tall cool glasses there
Of fruits joined in the blender.

Of playing in the ocean waves,
Then warming in the sun.
Becoming new beachcombing slaves
Until each day is done.

Of dining on exotic fish
Whos names we've never heard.
Sampling each and every dish,
New taste buds being stirred.

Of lazy nights , with pleasant dreams
Of peaceful, content rest.
We're in paradise, it seems!
Oh God, How we've been blessed.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-06-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Bev-
I can't make it to Hawaii,
but this sure makes me want to
head to the Florida Keys and watch
the sunset at Mallory Square, sipping
a pineapple frappe`.

Beautiful imagery.
~*Marge*~


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-06-2000).]
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 02-06-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You just took me to paradise. I can taste that cool brew. Are we in Margaridaville?
Enjoyed the poem
Liz
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3 posted 02-06-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I could sure use a nice trip to that warm inviting place! Lovely poem!

Denise

Bbuzz
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4 posted 02-06-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Bbuzz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bbuzz

Marge, We've never been to Florida, but any place we can be in shorts in the winter sounds wonderful! I can still see and feel it all! Thank you for your comments.
                                      Bev

Liz, How did you know about the margarita's? Could you see us? We raised our glasses to you! LOL Thank you, Bev


Thank you Dsnyder! I wish I could send you there! It was WONDERFUL! I miss it still.
                                       Bev
Isis
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5 posted 02-06-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Being Australian I have longed to go to Hawaii for years.  Your poem only makes me want to go there more and NOW!  I'm thrilled you had such a lovely time there.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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with you


6 posted 02-06-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Bbuzz,  this took me on a mini vacation! Sounds like Bliss! Great visions with beautiful words! -SEA
Bbuzz
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7 posted 02-06-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Bbuzz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bbuzz

Thank you both Isis and SEA! I was FILLED with poetry, so more to come! LOL. It was indeed paradise!
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-07-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

We're out there having fun in the warm
Hawaiian sun.  I have notice that the ones who already have a paradise of love and beauty in their hearts are the ones that experience the most enjoyment and pleasure on this Hawaiian Paradise.  I love the palm tree fronds swaying in the breeze also.  James  
Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 02-07-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Bev, yet another great poem you have here!  Still wish I was there too!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Bbuzz
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10 posted 02-07-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Bbuzz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bbuzz

Thank you James and Echo Rhayne. Quite a compliment from you James! I'd say "it takes one to know one". Thank you again,both of you!   Bev
aleisha
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11 posted 05-05-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for aleisha   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for aleisha

bbuzz this makes me want to hop on a plane today. Beautiful poem!
 
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