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Watching You

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Alina Le Ann
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WATCHING YOU


Late at night when alone
do you feel his eyes on you
you don't know why or who
but you know he's there
watching you

All alone in the dark as you begin to scare
you tell your self you are alone
but still you know he's there
watching you

Fear not,
For it's he who in the mainger lay
understand there's no need to be afraid
for God is there through and through
always there
watching you

© Copyright 2000 Alina Le Ann - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-06-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alina-
Beautiful thought.
He's always there day or night,
I reach for his comfort eyes.
Thanks for sharing this.
~*Marge*~


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Bbuzz
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Yes, Alina Le Ann, I have felt that also. Bless you for writing this!! Bev
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 02-06-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Alina, what a neat piece! Your first two stanzas had me thinking this was a "chiller" but the third was both a surprise and a delight. Loved this!

Claire
Alina Le Ann
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Thank you for your comments...they are most appreciated!!!



Alina Le Ann
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5 posted 02-06-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

At first I thought you were talking about a stalker! Great ending with a great message!

Denise
Gene
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Here's another one with a nice twist. I thought it was about a stalker too. Good one, Alina.

~Gene
Elizabeth Santos
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Beautiful thoughts, and your right, there is no need to fear
Liz
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8 posted 02-06-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Alina,
Enjoyed the read.
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Alina, it's such a good feeling to know He is always there watching over. You poem was lovely! -SEA
Alina Le Ann
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10 posted 02-06-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

I want to thank you all once again for all the wonderful comments.
You know I never really noticed the "twist" in this poem until a friend and a teacher mentioned how strong it was.....and now it seems as though that's the first thing everyone notices.  

thanks again

Alina Le Ann
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11 posted 02-07-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Alina...I think this is lovely...

I'm glad I was able to read something of yours... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
JamesMichael
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So lovely and so true Alina.  I have been through some very hard situations in my life but I have never been alone.  In my darkest moments when no one else seemed to care about me or my situation Jesus was always there and he put his arms around me and loved me and cared for me like no one else could.  I feel his love and his mercy and his compassion and I know I am never alone.  James
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Such wise words  
Parker
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Alina Le Ann,

I really love this one, nice twist.

Parker
Echo Rhayne
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15 posted 02-07-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Alina, such a beautiful poem!  Have you checked out our spiritual forum yet?  And I know this is a bit late, but I havent been around, but I wanted to welcome you to passions (just a few days late LoL)

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Alina Le Ann
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Thank you all so much for your comments...it means so much to me...I'm anxious to post more and hear from you all again.

Sincerely,
Alina Le Ann
 
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