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Watching You
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
WATCHING YOU Late at night when alone do you feel his eyes on you you don't know why or who but you know he's there watching you All alone in the dark as you begin to scare you tell your self you are alone but still you know he's there watching you Fear not, For it's he who in the mainger lay understand there's no need to be afraid for God is there through and through always there watching you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alina- Beautiful thought. He's always there day or night, I reach for his comfort eyes. Thanks for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Yes, Alina Le Ann, I have felt that also. Bless you for writing this!! Bev |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Alina, what a neat piece! Your first two stanzas had me thinking this was a "chiller" but the third was both a surprise and a delight. Loved this! Claire |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
Thank you for your comments...they are most appreciated!!!  Alina Le Ann |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
At first I thought you were talking about a stalker! Great ending with a great message! Denise |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Here's another one with a nice twist. I thought it was about a stalker too. Good one, Alina. ~Gene |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful thoughts, and your right, there is no need to fear Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alina, Enjoyed the read. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alina, it's such a good feeling to know He is always there watching over. You poem was lovely! -SEA |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
I want to thank you all once again for all the wonderful comments. You know I never really noticed the "twist" in this poem until a friend and a teacher mentioned how strong it was.....and now it seems as though that's the first thing everyone notices. thanks again Alina Le Ann |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Alina...I think this is lovely... I'm glad I was able to read something of yours...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So lovely and so true Alina. I have been through some very hard situations in my life but I have never been alone. In my darkest moments when no one else seemed to care about me or my situation Jesus was always there and he put his arms around me and loved me and cared for me like no one else could. I feel his love and his mercy and his compassion and I know I am never alone. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such wise words |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Alina Le Ann, I really love this one, nice twist. Parker |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Alina, such a beautiful poem! Have you checked out our spiritual forum yet? And I know this is a bit late, but I havent been around, but I wanted to welcome you to passions (just a few days late LoL) Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
Thank you all so much for your comments...it means so much to me...I'm anxious to post more and hear from you all again. Sincerely, Alina Le Ann |
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