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I felt it all erasing me......

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The Jackal
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0 posted 02-10-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

all the pretty things are free
feel the rise ..isolate me
raise the expectations high
drown that ghost
and never question why
make it feel incomplete
give a reason
present defeat
judge the fallen
become intense
spread your everything
but wear it all underneath..
simple pleasures never mine
im the TYPE of empty person
that wont survive the test of time..


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1 posted 02-11-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Great Poem Jackal. I don't really know exactly what you are feeling here but i know you'll get through it, time that is.
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 02-11-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I like your style Jackal, look forward to reading more ...keep smiling.......Roniece
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