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When did you stop loving me?

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Danny Holloway
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0 posted 02-07-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Danny Holloway

     When did you stop loving me
     and take hold of another's hand,
     When did love that seemed so strong
     begin to weaken and go so wrong

     When did our love begin to fade
     going from sunshine into the shade,
     When the other became your shining star
     I the one you saw from afar,

     A heart badly broken, without ever mending
     betrayed by a love that was only pretending
     gone now our times of enchantment
     leaving only feelings abandonment

     Alone now I walk, true feelings to hide
     trying to save my wounded pride
     tears all gone, they've all been cried
     something inside me recently died

     Now, sitting here, unable to feel
     you gone, me wondering what's real
     and so, I ask, one final plea
     When did you stop loving me?



 



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devina
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1 posted 02-07-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was beautiful Danny...if she left dear, she's the one losing out and you deserve far better!!!! Keep your spirits up hun!!

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2 posted 02-07-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Very nicely written. I have wonder the same thing myself.
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3 posted 02-07-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Danny, very touching. Very sad. Hope it works out. -SEA
Shelley
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4 posted 02-11-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

...Alone now I walk, true feelings to hide...
    
That line really jolted me. Very emotional piece and very well written.

beautiful!

(i found it!   )
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5 posted 02-13-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

i went through this when i had my heart broken last year. its an awful feeling, but self love and time heals all wounds..
i hope you feel better soon!
=)
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