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monique
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since 02-03-2000
Posts 377
Louisiana


0 posted 02-06-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique

Life is a temptation for me
To kill it
For to stop the sound of music
Changing my mood
Into a trip down south
To find love  
Running away from the cold cold north
I found nothing but trouble
I try to go back up
Nowhere I would fit
So I came back down
I fitted o'right
I got stuck in jail
In the country somewhere
Where I cannot see
The sun on the earth shining

I fell 10 feet underground


monique

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RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 1121
Champaign, IL


1 posted 02-06-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Monique.....I am so glad to read you again. I do not know if the other news group made you feel like me or not, but I have almost.. I have stopped writing poetry.

I need to stay just here to get my spirit back.


Robert
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 01-30-2000
Posts 2636
Sippin a Timmy's in London


2 posted 02-06-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Hi monique ... your pastures sure havn't been very green by the sounds of things
But coming here to Passions is a step in
a better direction
I agree with Robert ... the news groups
were a bad adjective to reality
Glad to have you with us

Rex
monique
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since 02-03-2000
Posts 377
Louisiana


3 posted 02-08-2000 03:15 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Thank you guys for saving my life
from the beef bad bull.
Olé!
monique
Poertree
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since 11-05-1999
Posts 1413
UK


4 posted 02-08-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for Poertree   Email Poertree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poertree

Moniqueeeeeeee

Hiiiiiiiii

Its great to see you here .. about time too that you left that den of inquity ..lol

Great poem btw .. and Happy New Year ..lol

Check out Critical Analysis as well where i mostly post .. and Welcome ...

Philip
monique
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since 02-03-2000
Posts 377
Louisiana


5 posted 02-08-2000 01:40 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Phiiiiiliiiiiip
This is too funny
Being here
And good
Thanks to Rex
I am overwhelm
To read everyone's poem from the heart
monique
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