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monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-02-06 06:26 PM


Life is a temptation for me
To kill it
For to stop the sound of music
Changing my mood
Into a trip down south
To find love  
Running away from the cold cold north
I found nothing but trouble
I try to go back up
Nowhere I would fit
So I came back down
I fitted o'right
I got stuck in jail
In the country somewhere
Where I cannot see
The sun on the earth shining

I fell 10 feet underground


monique


© Copyright 2000 monique - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
1 posted 2000-02-06 07:21 PM


Monique.....I am so glad to read you again. I do not know if the other news group made you feel like me or not, but I have almost.. I have stopped writing poetry.

I need to stay just here to get my spirit back.


Robert

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-02-06 09:24 PM


Hi monique ... your pastures sure havn't been very green by the sounds of things
But coming here to Passions is a step in
a better direction
I agree with Robert ... the news groups
were a bad adjective to reality
Glad to have you with us

Rex

monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
3 posted 2000-02-08 03:15 AM


Thank you guys for saving my life
from the beef bad bull.
Olé!
monique

Poertree
Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
4 posted 2000-02-08 06:53 AM


Moniqueeeeeeee

Hiiiiiiiii

Its great to see you here .. about time too that you left that den of inquity ..lol

Great poem btw .. and Happy New Year ..lol

Check out Critical Analysis as well where i mostly post .. and Welcome ...

Philip

monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
5 posted 2000-02-08 01:40 PM


Phiiiiiliiiiiip
This is too funny
Being here
And good
Thanks to Rex
I am overwhelm
To read everyone's poem from the heart
monique

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